翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/08/26 10:40:57

canuelta
canuelta 52 カナダに20年在住の日本人です。日本語ー英語、英語ー日本語、日本語ー仏語、...
日本語

2.価格修正機能について
以前に御社のシステムはF社よりも優れていると聞きました。

F社のシステムは価格の引き下げのみならず、
競合との比較やカート獲得状況をモニタリングしながら、
効果的に価格が引き上げられ利益を最大化しています。

御社のシステムも同様に価格の引き下げのみならず、
利益の最大化を期待できますか?

F社を上回るだけの効果が期待できることを説明いただくことは可能ですか?

今日の打ち合わせの際でなくても構いませんが
回答をお待ちしています。

英語

2. Price modification function

In the past, I have heard that your company is better than F company.

Not only the system of F company reduces the price, but also F company maximizes its profits that were increasing the price effectively by monitoring the comparison with other rival comapnies and cart acquisitions.

Can we expect to see if your company is able to maximize the profits as well as the reduction of the price for the system?
Would it be possible to explain to us if we can expect to obtain a better arrrangement than with F company?

This does not need to be discussed at today's appointment but we are looking forward to hearing your reponse soon.

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mirror1000 52 初めまして、翻訳の勉強をしながら、お仕事させて頂きたいと思っています。
mirror1000はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/27 13:16:41

元の翻訳
2. Price modification function

In the past, I have heard that your company is better than F company.

Not only the system of F company reduces the price, but also F company maximizes its profits that were increasing the price effectively by monitoring the comparison with other rival comapnies and cart acquisitions.

Can we expect to see if your company is able to maximize the profits as well as the reduction of the price for the system?
Would it be possible to explain to us if we can expect to obtain a better arrrangement than with F company?

This does not need to be discussed at today's appointment but we are looking forward to hearing your reponse soon.

修正後
2. Price modification function

In the past, I have heard that your company is better than F company.

Not only the system of F company reduces the price, but also F company maximizes its profits that were increasing the price effectively by monitoring the comparison with other rival companies and cart acquisitions.

Can we expect to see if your company is able to maximize the profits as well as the reduction of the price for the system?
Would it be possible to explain to us if we can expect to obtain a better arrangement than with F company?

This does not need to be discussed at today's appointment but we are looking forward to hearing your response soon.

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