Lilo (bijintachi1) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I ordered the goods from Japan.
Do you ship to Japan?
If you are willing to ship to Japan, how much is the shipping cost?

In the case you ship to Japan, I plan to do a large order which is about 3000-5000 US dollars!

I look forward to your reply.

修正後
I am ordering the goods from Japan.
Do you accept shipping to Japan?
If you do, how much is the shipping cost?

In case you can ship to Japan, I plan to do a large order which is about 3000-5000 US dollars!

I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、

このカメラはロードバイクに取り付けられ、一度これを使用していた。それが乗馬の2時間後にスナップした。

我々はこのことについて何ができるか？↵

よろしくお願いします。

修正後
こんにちは、

このカメラをロードバイクに取り付け、一度これを使用しました。2時間後にも撮影できました。

どういたしましょうか？
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
I had email to you regarding the matter of exhibitor registration.

I have sent an e-mail with the following contents to you many times but
There is absolutely no progress so it can not be registered.

修正後
I emailed you regarding the matter of seller registration.

I have sent an e-mail with the following contents to you many times but
there is absolutely no progress so it can not be registered.

元の翻訳
FOod lock is a little loose at the time of food storage. Food does not have to be loose, especially at the time of use.

修正後
Hood lock is a bit loose during storage. During usage, there is not any particular problem with looseness.

元の翻訳
I was glad to speak about the story! Actually I was surprised.
I understand it was not suspend so I am really feel safe.
I just need to wait for the completion of the validation, right?
By the way, last time a document of validation is issued on the July 12th.
Later, I do not received any contact by validation team.
I think time has been consuming too.
Is there was a deficiency in the documents to be submitted?
I would like to ask you to re-submitted if there is a deficiency.

修正後
I was glad to speak about the story, although I was surprised.
I was relieved to find out that it was not a suspension.
I just need to wait for the completion of the validation, right?
By the way, I last submitted the validation documents on 12th July.
Since then, I have not received any reply from validation team.
I think it is taking too long.
Was the information provided in my submission not enough?
If there is anything else I need to submit please let me know.