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I'm so sorry, because a different person (Facebook department) has mistakenly responded to you.
Please be at ease since we order department surely comprehend the contents.

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I'm so sorry. A different person from our office (Facebook department) has mistakenly responded to you.
Our order department understand your order correctly, please be at ease.

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#1
きちんと把握できているか定かではありませんが、双方にとってクリアにできるように努力します。
ご希望でいらっしゃるのは既にeBayとPayPalで決済が済んでいる2つの注文のほかに追加で2件ご注文されたいと言うことだと思っています。
追加4つであれば＄96で対応します。PayPal経由で請求書を＄96にしてお送りしますので、計6は古文の送料をお支払下さい。
2箱分ということで＄50で結構です。
おっしゃるとおり、eBayの手数料分を双方にとって浮かせることができますが、それでも各箱＄2以上の送料はこちらで負担いたします。お客様が2箱のみご注文ということであれば、それ以上の金額を負担いたします。＄96で手を打って頂ければこちらとしては元がとれます。

残念ながら、これらの商品は私のものではないので、所有者と相談しなくてはなりません。前回の出品から多少値段を下げたので、おそらく昨日の時点では販売していなかったと思われます。

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#1
きちんと把握できているか定かではありませんが、双方にとってクリアにできるように努力します。
ご希望でいらっしゃるのは既にeBayとPayPalで決済が済んでいる2つの注文のほかに追加で2件ご注文されたいと言うことだと思っています。
追加4つであれば＄96で対応します。PayPal経由で請求書を＄96にしてお送りしますので、計6は個分の送料をお支払下さい。
2箱分ということで＄50で結構です。
おっしゃるとおり、eBayの手数料分を双方にとって浮かせることができますが、それでも各箱＄2以上の送料はこちらで負担いたします。お客様が2箱のみご注文ということであれば、それ以上の金額を負担いたします。＄96で手を打って頂ければこちらとしては元がとれます。

残念ながら、これらの商品は私のものではないので、所有者と相談しなくてはなりません。前回の出品から多少値段を下げたので、おそらく昨日の時点では販売していなかったと思われます。

元の翻訳
How do you do?
My name is . I am a film writer in Japan.
Thank you for announcing a remarkable short movie. I appreciate it.

Those who are in film industry as well as my friends are also excited about your film very much.
If you don' t mind, why don't we introduce this work on Japanese web news such as media Huffington Post Japanese version?

Also I would be happier if I can interview you by Skype?
What do you think about it?

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How do you do?
My name is ○○○ . I am a Videographer in Japan.
Thank you for presenting a remarkable short movie. I appreciate it.

Those who are in video industry as well as my friends are also excited about your video work very much.
If you don' t mind, we would like to introduce this work on Japanese web news such as media Huffington Post Japanese version?

Also I would be happier if I can interview you by Skype?
What do you think about this?

元の翻訳
Hello, I am writing to you for the first time. My name is ○○○, and am image writer in Japan.
Thank you very much for presenting wonderful short movie.
My friend and also the Japanese image business related members are all excited after seeing your film.
If you allow us, I would like to introduce this film on Japanese Web media such as huffingtonpost Japan edition. Please let me know how do you think?
I also would like to interview you with Skype, and please let me know if that is possible.

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Hello, I am writing to you for the first time. My name is ○○○, and am a Vediographer in Japan.
Thank you very much for presenting wonderful short movie.
My friend and also the Japanese image business related members are all excited after seeing your work.
If you allow us, I would like to introduce this film on Japanese Web media such as huffingtonpost Japan edition. Please let me know how do you think about this idea?
I also would like to interview you with Skype, and please let me know if that is possible.

元の翻訳
Since your feedback may negatively impact to our future business, we would like you to delete it if possible.

Many NZ customers were pleased with our Japanese products. Let alone you, as our dear customer, we would like to support NZ customers to buy those Japanese products. It's not too late to re-ship the correct item to you. If you need any help, please do let us know. We would do anything for you to the best of our knowledge and expertise.

If you would delete the comment, please follow the below steps. Thank you for your kind understanding and best regards,

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Since your feedback may negatively impact to our future business, we would like you to delete it if possible.

Many NZ customers were pleased with our Japanese products. Let alone you, as our dear customer, we would like to support NZ customers to buy those Japanese products in the future too. It's not too late to re-ship the correct item to you. If you need any help, please do let us know. We would do anything for you to the best of our knowledge and expertise.

If you would delete the comment, please follow the below steps. Thank you for your kind understanding and best regards,

元の翻訳
We are really sorry that we have caused you so much trouble. Did you make sure that we refunded you the other day? We had asked you to return the item we mistakenly sent and we contacted you in an inappropriate way.
Again, we apologize for the trouble this has caused you.

We understand your inconvenience, so please receive the item and you do not need to return it to us.
Lastly, it would be appreciated if you could accept our request, which is about the feedback you wrote on Amazon.

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We are really sorry that we have caused you so much trouble. Did you make sure that we refunded you the other day? We had asked you to return the item we mistakenly sent and we contacted you in an inappropriate way.
Again, we apologize for the trouble we have caused you.

We understand your inconvenience, so please receive the item and you do not need to return it to us.
Lastly, we would appreciate if you could accept our request, which is about the feedback you wrote on Amazon.

元の翻訳
It seems like it is hard to trust me.
My wife is suffering too due to our first child end up dystocia.
I can't separate away from my wife,
so I will reimburse the fee.

Please never cancel in the future.

The product is certainly the real, and there is not a single bad review about me.
I put focus on building the trusting relationship most.
I have received my first child this time.
If you can't understand the deal, or can't agree with it, the canceling is the good option.
There are many people who like to purchase this item, due to the high demand.
This time, I guess it was not your fate to get this product.

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It seems like it is hard to trust me.
My wife is suffering too due to our first child end up dystocia.
I can't separate away from my wife,
so I will reimburse the fee.

Please cancel the deal this time.

The product is certainly the real, and there is not a single bad review about me.
I put focus on building the trusting relationship most.
I have received my first child this time.
If you can't understand the deal, or can't agree with it, the canceling is the good option.
There are many people who like to purchase this item, due to the high demand.
This time, I guess it was not your fate to get this product.

元の翻訳
I don't believe this product is available in Japan yet.

This marvelous product provides both pregnant women and their unborn babies the finest in safety.

Just the other day, my friend was involved in a traffic accident. She was pregnant at the time. She was also not wearing her seat belt, and the shock of the crash lead her to lose her baby. I really believe that if she had that product at the time her baby would have survived. But she is still devastated by the loss and has yet to recover. I wish to prevent others from going through her tragedy.

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I don't believe this product is available in Japan yet.

This marvelous product provides both pregnant women and their unborn babies the finest in safety.

Just the other day, my friend was involved in a traffic accident. She was pregnant at the time. She was also not wearing her seat belt, and the shock of the crash lead her to lose her baby. I really believe that if she had had that product at the time her baby would have survived. But she is still devastated by the loss and has not yet to recover. I wish to prevent others from going through her tragedy.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting with me.
Your wife is having a labor and we are at a hospital.
I would like to send but we're not sure when the baby will come out so I can't leave here.
The doctor said we'll see by Sunday.
I'm sorry about this, I'll send it by Monday.
Thank you so much for your patience.

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Thank you for contacting with me.
My wife is in a labor and we are at a hospital.
I would like to send you the items, but we're not sure when the baby will come out so I can't leave here.
The doctor said we'll see by Sunday.
I'm sorry about this, I'll send it by Monday.
Thank you so much for your patience.