Agnes Chen (agnesc) — 付けたレビュー

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I purchased the previous item but in the package there are instructions that state "This should be used via a qualified physician or chiropractor"
Is it possible to send a copy saying that this product is licensed by a qualified person?
Also, I've bought something before but there was never this sort of instruction. Why is that?
I look forward to hearing back from you.

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I'm the person who purchased this item previously, but in the package there are instructions that state "This should be used according to the instructions of a qualified physician or chiropractor"
Is it possible to send a copy of proof which says that this product is licensed by a qualified person?
Also, I've bought the same product before but there was never this sort of instruction. Why is that?
I look forward to hearing back from you.

元の翻訳
It took sometime on the translation and explanation of the agreement.
This time is the consent of agreement.

I have consulted the host of regarding the Foodex2014 exhibition,
It is planned that small booths will be set up next time.

1.5mx1.2m sized booth is around 1600 dollars. 2.7mx2.7m sized booth is around 5000 dollars.
I think 1.5x1.2 sized booth will be alright.
Which one will you choose? Please let me know your opinions on this.

I have also attached the information.
I am currently researching on the opening medicine related exhibitions.

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It took sometime on the translation and explanation of the agreement.
I consent to the agreement this time.

I have consulted the host the Foodex2014 exhibition,
There are plans that small booths will be set up next time.

A 1.5mx1.2m sized booth is around 1600 dollars. A 2.7mx2.7m sized booth is around 5000 dollars.
I think the 1.5x1.2 sized booth will be alright.
Which one will you choose? Please let me know your opinion about this.

I have also attached the information.
I am currently researching on the opening medicine related exhibitions.

元の翻訳
Babies are brimming with curiosity.
This is a toy that assembled things that are made to look exactly like what babies love to touch in the house.

[Addictive box II] is packed with 16 easy and educational toys that arouses the curiosity of babies with multiple emotional actions.
・Get the pulling action of receipts through the cash machine
・A pop-up action of fruits and seesaw buttons
・Play with the fun water taps
・Play with the set button and ping pong balls
・The upper button makes the lights flash
・The star-shaped button makes melodies (8 songs included)

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Babies are brimming with curiosity.
This is a toy that assembled things that are made to look exactly like what babies love to touch in the house.

[Addictive box II] is packed with 16 easy and educational toys that arouses the curiosity of babies with multiple emotional actions.
・Get the pulling action of receipts through the cash machine
・A pop-up action of fruits and seesaw buttons
・Play with the fun water taps
・Play with the set button which launches ping pong balls
・The upper button makes the lights flash
・The star-shaped button plays melodies (8 songs included)

元の翻訳
Thank you for a lot of candies! I will be using the water bottle starting next week!

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Thank you for the large amount of candies! I will be using the water bottle starting next week!

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Today, a nice luggage arrived from Ken, my Instagram mate. Thank you. I am very happy. Please wait so I will send something in a short time.


2.
Today, a luggage from you arrived. Thank you for many things! I am very happy. Would you send me a official address by e-mail since I will send you something? I am waiting for a reply.

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1.
Today, a nice luggage arrived from Ken, my Instagram mate. Thank you. I am very happy. Please wait so I will send something in the near future.


2.
Today, a luggage from you arrived. Thank you for the many things! I am very happy. Would you send me a official address by e-mail so I can send you something? I am waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
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As for the contributed content, basically contributing to the reader's interest and what they need is very important.
Just like Facebook's specialty, how the picture's quality will affect the article becomes a crucial point.