jerry　liu (516494886) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
The mistaken item has arrived at Japan.
The total cost including the international shipping fare from New Jersey to Japan, customs duties and domestic shipping fare to our ware house is $ 30.
More cost and time will be taken if the items is returned back to your ware house.
Fortunately, the items with this color are popular with our customer. So we propose to buy them with the price discounted the $ 30 from the original price. How aout this proposal ?
In case you need them to ship back, we need you to pay the return fare of $ 30 , besides $ 30 spent unitl now .
Please let us know your decision and thank you.

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The mistaken item [unnatural] has arrived in Japan.
The total cost, including the international shipping fare from New Jersey to Japan, customs duties, and domestic shipping fare to our ware house [spelling] is $30.
More cost and time will be taken [wrong verb] if the items is [s-v agreement] returned back to your ware house [spelling].
Fortunately, the items with this color are popular with our customer [singular vs. plural]. So we propose to buy them with the price discounted [unnatural] the $30 from the original price. How aout [spelling] this proposal?
In case you need them to ship back [awkward], we need you to pay the return fare of $30, besides $ 30 spent [awkward] unitl [spelling] now .
Please let us know your decision and thank you.

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It is not my fault the products are held in the plant without the payment done by your customer.
It is planned to ship the products by sea, and it is estimated to arrive at Osaka next month.
The products will be shipped by air to meet the appointed day of delivery.
In case using the air shipment, the cost will be 4 times as that planned.
I feel so sorry, however, could you please cover the extra cost with me equally ?

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I have nothing to do with the fact that the products are held in the plant without the payment done by your customer.
It is planned to ship the products by sea, and it is estimated to arrive at Osaka next month.
The products will be shipped by air to meet the appointed day of delivery.
In case using the air shipment, the cost will be 4 times as that planned.
I feel so sorry, however, could you please cover the extra cost with me equally ?

元の翻訳
5%の手数料がかかりますが、クレジットカードの支払は問題有りません。添付のクレジットカード承認フォームを参考ください。

各GL061のソーラ移動電源のカートンには四つの移動電源が入っていますので、8セットをオーダーしたほうが宜しいかと思います。（発送料金がほぼ同じ）。これで宜しいでしょうか。

カートンのサイズが74 x 43 x 43 cm、重さは5キロであります。

これらの情報が役立ってばと思いますが、御興味とご注文に感謝します。我々ができることが有れば、お気軽にお問い合わせください。

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5%の手数料がかかりますが、クレジットカードの支払は問題有りません。添付のクレジットカード承認フォームを参考になさってください。

GL061のソーラーシステム（太陽系）のモビールの入った各カートンには四つのモビールが入っていますので、8セットをオーダーしたほうが宜しいかと思います。（発送料金が基本的に同じ）。これで宜しいでしょうか。

カートンのサイズが74 x 43 x 43 cm、重さは5キロあります。

これらの情報が役立ってばと思います。御興味とご注文に感謝します。我々ができることが有れば、お気軽にお問い合わせください。

元の翻訳
Sorry for any inconvenience this time

I have requested eBay withthe change of feedback on 2nd, October.

The e-mail from eBay should have reached to you already,
After checking your account by eBay, ↵
It turns to be that the e-mail from eBay is transfered to the trash holder

Please click and the e-mail from eBay in the trash holder to change the feedback from Negative to Positive.

The change of the feedback has to be done by 12th, October 12.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Sorry for the inconvenience this time.

I asked eBay to change your feedback on October 2.

The e-mail from eBay should have reached to you already.
After checking your account by eBay (dangling modifier), It turns out that the e-mail from eBay is transfered to the trash holder.

Please open the e-mail from eBay in the trash holder to change the feedback from Negative to Positive.

The feedback has to be changed by October 12.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Tamahagane is a special steel with high hardness, which need special machine to cut it off.

Even you are requesting to cut it with 500g, please be aware of the unavoidable tolerance.

In case, the items not included in the exhibited ones are ordered currently, cause they need to be shipped from the workshop directly, it may take 1 week before the shipment is ready.

In the case of no stock, sometimes it may take more than 1 month.

In case of order with more than 1kg, the item will be sold at $ 5 per 100g.
So it takes $ 500 for 1kg. The shipping fee is $ 27.

You can search for "Taro" and send me an email to take the order, or go to pay the $ 12 to bid the No.1.
Please go to pay the $ 12 to bid the No1.

修正後
Tamahagane is a special steel with high hardness, which needs special machine to cut it off.

Even you are requesting to cut it with 500g, please be aware of the unavoidable tolerance.

In case, the items not included in the exhibited ones are ordered currently, cause they need to be shipped from the workshop directly, it may take 1 week before the shipment is ready.

In the case of no stock, sometimes it may take more than 1 month.

In case of order with more than 1kg, the item will be sold at $ 5 per 100g.
So it takes $ 500 for 1kg. The shipping fee is $ 27.

You can search for "Taro" and send me an email to take the order, or go to pay the $ 12 to bid the No.1.
Please go to pay the $ 12 to bid the No1.

元の翻訳
Recently, I went to the place called 〜 for shopping, where takes 15 minutes from my home by train.
Maybe you feel familiar with this place somehow, it is the place that appeared in favorite cartoon comic "~". It is also used as a location of the drama.
It is located in the west side of Tokyo and there is a little issue to get access there, but it worth your visit if you have the chance.

Indeed, besides English, it is a rule to learn one more language in your country. Right ?
Since there is little opportunity to speak English in daily life in Japan, I do like the rule in your country, so that I am able to learn English with less hardship.

修正後
Recently, I went to the place called 〜 for shopping. It took15 minutes from my home by train.
Maybe you are familiar with this place somehow, it is the place that appeared in your favorite cartoon comic "~". It is also used as a location of the drama.
It is located in the west side of Tokyo and there is a little issue to get access there, but it worth your visit if you have the chance.

Indeed, besides English, it is essential to learn one more language in your country. Right ?
Since there is little opportunity to speak English in daily life in Japan, I do like the rule in your country, so that I am able to learn English with less hardship.

元の翻訳
[Genera Ticket l Release Date] 10:00~ (Sat) November 29, 2014 (scheduled )
[Fee (tax included)] All seats reserved ¥ 8,200
※ Children over 4 years of age need ticket. Children under 3 years of age is free to sit above the knee to one guardian per person.
※ Please note that refund or date change due to the actors change is not available.

■■ fan club ticket pre-order ■■

Please get access to the Member's page of "DAICHI MIURA " website for your application.
http://daichi-miura.jp/

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[Genera Ticket l Release Date] 10:00~ (Sat) November 29, 2014 (scheduled )
[Fee (tax included)] All seats reserved ¥ 8,200
* Children over 4 years of age need ticket. Children under 3 years of age is free to sit above the knee to one guardian per person.
* Please note that refund or date change due to the actors change is not available.

■■ fan club ticket pre-order ■■

Please get access to the Member's page of "DAICHI MIURA " website for your application.
http://daichi-miura.jp/

元の翻訳
直ちにジェットスピードに返金するようにします。我々が提供しているツアーイシュー製品に対して、貴方が興味を持っていないようです。日本のお客様は、ツアーイシュー製品に非常に興味を持っていると聞いていますが、貴方は任意の購入をされていません。私からの前のメールに示されているように、SLDRドライバーは、つま先は460ccのネジとなります。そして8度のロフトが有ります。私は今10個を持っているが、今週まで売れると思いますので、もし興味が有れば、ぜひ早いうちにお知らせください。
私は5セットのCAMILOビジェガスを持っています。ご希望の価格はいくらでしょうか。ebayでは799.00で販売しています。今はこれを処分するつもりですが、興味が有れば、連絡して頂ければと思います。宜しくお願い致します。

修正後
直ちにジェットスピードに関しては返金するようにします。我々が提供しているツアーイシュー製品に対して、興味を持たれていないようですね。日本のお客様は、ツアーイシュー製品に非常に興味を持っていると聞いていますが、お客様は購入をされていません。私からの前のメールに示されているように、SLDRドライバーは、つま先は460ccのネジとなります。そして8度のロフトが有ります。私は今10個を持っているが、今週中に売りきれると思いますので、もし興味が有れば、ぜひ早いうちにお知らせください。
私は5セットのCAMILOビジェガスを持っています。ご希望の価格はいくらでしょうか。ebayでは799.00で販売されています。今はこれを処分するつもりですが、興味が有れば、連絡して頂ければと思います。宜しくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
This is a Japanese production. The mannul is only Japanese. Seiko radio control watch is available to use in Japan, America, Germany, and China.

修正後
This is a Japanese product. The manual is only in Japanese. Seiko radio control watch is available to use in Japan, America, Germany, and China.

元の翻訳
This is a Japanese production. The mannul is only Japanese. Seiko radio control watch is available to use in Japan, America, Germany, and China.

修正後
This is a Japanese production. The mannul is only in Japanese. Seiko radio control watch is available to use in Japan, America, Germany, and China.

元の翻訳
The grill I bought is little different from what I expected, could you let me know how to return it ?

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The grill I bought was a little different from what I had expected, so please advise the return procedure ?

元の翻訳
The grill I bought is little different from what I expected, could you let me know how to return it ?

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The grill I bought is different from what I expected, so could you let me know how to return it?

元の翻訳
Why I only get the refund of $492, while I payed $567.55 totally.
(No return of the item is needed, that is why I accepted offer wiht the refund of $492. However, I note that the item need to be returned after I accept the offer)
Is there no doubt that full amount $ 567.55 I paid should be refund ,as long as necessary item return?
※I understand I should pay the shippment fare to return the item, which is specified by Ebay rule. However, it doesn't make any sense the shippment fare of buyying it, due to the seller's mistake.
If I were the seller, full amount should be refund, if it is an item issue.

修正後
Why did I only get the refund of $492, while I paid $567.55.
(I thought no return of the item is needed, that is why I accepted offer with the refund of $492. However, I noticed that the item need to be returned after I accepted the offer)
Isn't it evident that full amount $ 567.55 I paid should be refunded now that the necessary item was returned?
※I understand I should pay the shipment fare to return the item, which is specified by Ebay rule. However, it doesn't make any sense the shipment fare of buying it, due to the seller's mistake.
If I were the seller, I would refund the full amount if there's something wrong with the item.

元の翻訳
Why I only get the refund of $492, while I payed $567.55 totally.
(No return of the item is needed, that is why I accepted offer wiht the refund of $492. However, I note that the item need to be returned after I accept the offer)
Is there no doubt that full amount $ 567.55 I paid should be refund ,as long as necessary item return?
※I understand I should pay the shippment fare to return the item, which is specified by Ebay rule. However, it doesn't make any sense the shippment fare of buyying it, due to the seller's mistake.
If I were the seller, full amount should be refund, if it is an item issue.

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Why I only get the refund of $492, while I payed [spelling] $567.55 totally?
(No return of the item is needed, that is why I accepted offer wiht [spelling] the refund of $492. However, I note that the item need to be returned after I accept the offer)
Is there no doubt that full amount $ 567.55 I paid should be refund ,as long as necessary item return?
※I understand I should pay the shippment [spelling] fare to return the item, which is specified by eBay rule. However, it doesn't make any sense the shippment [spelling] fare of buyying [spelling] it, due to the seller's mistake.
If I were the seller, full amount should be refund, if it is an item issue.

元の翻訳
In case of a tie game, all the players are able to get the points.
Example: the number and color of the dice in each area is as below.
Area 1: red 3, blue 3, yellow 4
Area 2: red 2, blue 3, yellow 3
Area 3: red 1, blue 3, yellow 0
The total value of the dice will be added as the number of the color dice the maximum number of thar in each area(in bold).
If there are more than one player who has the maximum number of dice, the point will be got by the player who has the minimum number of total value of the dice.
As a result, the relative number will be shown as the figure above. .

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In case of a tie game, all the players are able to get the points.
Example: the number and color of the dice in each area is as below.
Area 1: red 3, blue 3, yellow 4
Area 2: red 2, blue 3, yellow 3
Area 3: red 1, blue 3, yellow 0
The total value of the dice will be added to the number of the color dice with maximum number in each area(in bold).
If there are more than one player who has the maximum number of dice, the point will be got by the player who has the minimum sum of the dice.
As a result, the relative number will be shown as the figure above. .

元の翻訳
Your order is being pending as your said.
Since the order is transfered via Amazon, the detail need to confirm with Amazon.
I am going to ask Amazon to contact with you, please keep waiting until then.
In case no contact from Amazon, please try to contact with Amazon directly.

The following message is from a customer.
Please contact the customer for the confirmation of payment status and shipment.
Please let me know if there is any question.

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As you said, your order is pending .
Since the order is shipped via Amazon, you need to confirm the details with Amazon.
I am going to ask Amazon to contact you, please wait until then.
In case of no contact from Amazon, please try to contact Amazon directly.

The following message is from a customer.
Please contact the customer for the confirmation of payment status and shipment.
Please let me know if there is any question.

元の翻訳
a-nation stadium fes. powered by in jelly

Date: August 30, 2014 (Sat)
Door open:14:00 / Show start:16:00
Location: Elementary Of Taste Stadium, Tokyo
Performing Artists: May J.
Every Little Thing · KREVA · sonar pocket · TVXQ and more ...
※ Alphabetical order

■ Acceptance period: from 18th June (Wen) PM 3:00 to 23th June (Mon) PM 11:59

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a-nation stadium fes. powered by in jelly

Date: August 30, 2014 (Sat)
Door open:14:00 / Show start:16:00
Location: Ajinomoto Stadium, Tokyo
Performing Artists: May J.
Every Little Thing · KREVA · sonar pocket · TVXQ and more ...
※ Alphabetical order

■ Acceptance period: from 18th June (Wed) PM 3:00 to 23th June (Mon) PM 11:59

元の翻訳
② In order to response the email from buyer during business time, 1 or 2 special staff will be hired.

③So far, not all of items are attached with the tracking No. From now on, the tracking No. will be attached with all items shipped out.

④In order to have the buyer to get to items as soon as possible, all items will be delivered by air mail in the future, instead of sea mail used to be used for some items in the past.

⑤Inform the buyer once the condition of items shipped out is confirmed.

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② In order to response [parts of speech confusion] the email from buyer during business time, 1 or 2 special staff [unaccountable noun] will be hired.

③So far, not all of items are attached [word choice] with a tracking number. From now on, a tracking number will be attached with all items shipped out.

④In order to deliver items as soon as possible, all items will be delivered by air mail in the future, instead of sea mail used to be used for some items in the past.

⑤Inform the buyer once the condition of items shipped out is confirmed.

元の翻訳
Please get access to the offical web site of this event.
http://www.j-pop.com/2014/tokyo-girls-style/ (Language：English)

修正後
Please check the details in the official website of this event.
http://www.j-pop.com/2014/tokyo-girls-style/ (Language：English)