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Leo Collins (2510leo) — 付けたレビュー

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8年以上前 男性 30代
イギリス
英語 (ネイティブ) 日本語
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2510leo この翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語
2016/07/27 18:44:23

元の翻訳
The latest promotion collection of a diva who caused a whirlwind to the world, LADY GAGA.
The recording includes upto 30 songs greatest listened at full volume. Of course, Born This Way is included!
It also inlays the live version with the contents you will never get tired of.
The promotion collection that comprises all of Rihanna's songs from the day of her debut to the latest songs of 2013! A live clip is also added to the bonus video, making a total of 51 songs in 3.5 hours - it's just a catch! Highly recommended.
It is organized by song so you can be immersed in it for many times. A very handy item.

修正後
The latest promotion collection of the diva who caused a *whirlwind to the world*, LADY GAGA.
The recording includes *up to* 30 songs *greatest* listened to at full volume. Of course, Born This Way is included!
It also*inlays* the live version with contents you will never get tired of.
The promotion collection that comprises all of Rihanna's songs from the day of her debut to her latest songs from 2013! A live clip is also added to the bonus video, making a total of 51 songs in 3.5 hours - it's just a catch! Highly recommended.
It is organized by song so you can *be immersed in it for many times*. A *very handy* item.

2510leo この翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語
2016/07/24 21:23:47
コメント
I think there is a mistake here: 返金いただけない場合 ´- 'if you refund the payment' should be 'if you do not refund the payment'