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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2019/11/07 17:07:47

kumako-gohara
kumako-gohara 52 銀行勤務2年半(日本)、会計事務所勤務3年(海外)。 社内外問わず、相手...
英語

価格表とAの提案をありがとうございます。
今回はAに関してこちらから提案があります。

ボックス単位の注文ではなくBのAを50個(全カラートータル)、Cを20個からにしていただけませんか?
今回は前回とは違いBの全色を販売しようと思っています。下記のバリエーションでの販売を予定しています。

販売バリエーション
・B 単品 各カラー
・C 単品
・B+Cセット

全色販売することにより注文数は以前のDを上回る可能性が大きいです。
Aを下げてもらえれば全色展開での販売が可能となります。

日本語

Thanks for the price chart and your proposal of A.
I propose regarding A in this time.

Can I change my order from order per box to the order as below?
- A of B is from 50 units (all color total.)
- C is from 29 units.
I would like to sell all color of B in this time. I mean it is different from the one in last time.
I will sell below variation.

Sales variation
・B SIngle item each color
・C Single item
・B + C set

Because we sell all colors, the number of order will be more than previous D. It is high possibility.
If you remove A, we can sell all colors.

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mars16 60 翻訳を始めて、そしてConyacに参加して5年ほどになります(スタンダード...
mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2020/01/27 20:57:05

元の翻訳
Thanks for the price chart and your proposal of A.
I propose regarding A in this time.

Can I change my order from order per box to the order as below?
- A of B is from 50 units (all color total.)
- C is from 29 units.
I would like to sell all color of B in this time. I mean it is different from the one in last time.
I will sell below variation.

Sales variation
・B SIngle item each color
・C Single item
・B + C set

Because we sell all colors, the number of order will be more than previous D. It is high possibility.
If you remove A, we can sell all colors.

修正後
Thanks for the price chart and your proposal of A.
Regarding A, I would like to propose the following this time:

Can I change my order from order per box to the order as below?
- A of B is from 50 units (all color total.)
- C is from 29 units.
I would like to sell all color of B in this time. I mean it is different from the one in last time.
I will sell below variation.

Sales variation
・B SIngle item each color
・C Single item
・B + C set

Because we sell all colors, It is highly likely that the number of order will be more than that of previous D.
If you remove A, we can sell all colors.

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