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評価: 44 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2017/09/05 11:30:36

ka28310
ka28310 44 長年、半導体(システムLSI)検証を手掛け、多くの英文ドキュメントに触れて...
日本語

製品のロットは写真刻印から、○○と判明しました。
その製造履歴を確認したところ、問題はございませんでした。

Aにフェルトガスケットを付けているということは、不良が起きたのは開梱時ではないと思いますが、開梱時の製品写真はありませんか?(ガスケット無しの状態での写真 等)

また、梱包状態の写真はございませんか。(段ボールの潰れや、袋が破けている 等が無かったかを確認したいです。)
※梱包状態は1ヶ1ヶ袋に入れて段ボール(内箱)に入れた後、更に内箱4箱を外箱1箱に梱包しています。



英語

The lot of the product has turned out to be 〇〇 from the engraved mark shown in the picture.
According to the manufacturing history, there is no issue.

I don't think the defect was made when the package was opened because the felt gasket was put on A, but don't you have the picture taken when the package was opened? (the picture showing it without the gasket etc.)

Also don't you have the picture showing the package is opened? (I would like to confirm whether the cardboard box is damaged or not and whether the bag is broken or not,)
※ The products are put in a bag respectively for each, and they are put in the cardboard box (inner box). Furthermore, four inner boxes are packed in one outer box.

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surgeon 53  米国での在住経験もあり、英文の医学論文等を原文で参照または英文で執筆、そ...
surgeonはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2017/09/06 12:37:10

元の翻訳
The lot of the product has turned out to be 〇〇 from the engraved mark shown in the picture.
According to the manufacturing history, there is no issue.

I don't think the defect was made when the package was opened because the felt gasket was put on A, but don't you have the picture taken when the package was opened? (the picture showing it without the gasket etc.)

Also don't you have the picture showing the package is opened? (I would like to confirm whether the cardboard box is damaged or not and whether the bag is broken or not,)
※ The products are put in a bag respectively for each, and they are put in the cardboard box (inner box). Furthermore, four inner boxes are packed in one outer box.

修正後
The lot of the product has turned out to be 〇〇 from the engraved mark shown in the picture.
According to the manufacturing history, there is no issue.

I don't think the defect was made when the package was opened because the felt gasket was put on A, but don't you have the picture taken when the package was opened? (the picture showing it without the gasket etc.)

Also don't you have the picture showing the package before been opened? (I would like to confirm whether the cardboard box is damaged or not and whether the bag is broken or not,)
※ The products are put in a bag respectively for each, and they are put in the cardboard box (inner box). Furthermore, four inner boxes are packed in one outer box.

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