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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2017/05/29 05:12:16

itumotennki4
itumotennki4 52 国立外国語大学英語科卒業 過去にイギリス留学の経験があります。 TOE...
英語

だにえるへ
お誕生日おめでとう!
いつも仲良くして、気にかけてくれて本当にありがとう!
おかげで楽しい思い出が着々と増えてるよ。
これからも美味しいものを食べに行ったり、旅行へと出かけたりたくさん楽しもうね。
普段わたしの英語の理解力が低すぎて、あなたのジョークもひろってあげられないけど(笑)必ずペラペラになれるようにがんばります！気長に付き合ってね。(笑)そして、私の下手な英語をいつも一生懸命聞いてくれてありがとう。
来年も、再来年もダニエルのお誕生日をお祝い出来ますように。
これからもよろしくね。

日本語

Dear Daniel,

Happy birthday!
Thank you so much for your friendliness and kindness.
Thanks to you, I am getting happy memories a lot.
Let's have much more fun from now on going to have delicious dishes, going on a trip and so on.
Because of my lack of communication skill in English, I usually cannot understand your jokes.(LOL)
I will try my best to be a good speaker!
So, please be patient. (LOL)
And thank you again for listening my poor English patiently.
I wish I could celebrate your birthday next year and year after next as well.
Let's stay good friends.

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mars16 60 翻訳を始めて、そしてConyacに参加して5年ほどになります（スタンダード...
mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2017/06/19 21:11:17

元の翻訳
Dear Daniel,

Happy birthday!
Thank you so much for your friendliness and kindness.
Thanks to you, I am getting happy memories a lot.
Let's have much more fun from now on going to have delicious dishes, going on a trip and so on.
Because of my lack of communication skill in English, I usually cannot understand your jokes.(LOL)
I will try my best to be a good speaker!
So, please be patient. (LOL)
And thank you again for listening my poor English patiently.
I wish I could celebrate your birthday next year and year after next as well.
Let's stay good friends.

修正後
Dear Daniel,

Happy birthday!
Thank you so much for your friendliness and kindness.
Thanks to you, I am getting happy memories a lot.
Let's have much more fun from now on going to have delicious dishes, going on a trip and so on.
Because of my lack of communication skill in English, I usually cannot understand your jokes.(LOL)
I will try my best to be a fluent English speaker!
So, please be patient. (LOL)
And thank you again for listening to my poor English patiently.
I wish I could celebrate your birthday next year and the year after next as well.
Let's stay good friends.

itumotennki4 itumotennki4 2017/06/19 21:23:26

ありがとうございます。

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