翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 57 / 1 Review / 2016/12/07 15:38:08

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[削除済みユーザ] 57 シンガポール人で日本に4年間翻訳者として滞在しておりますので英語も中国語も...
日本語

うわーい!家族も皆、私の誕生日などすっかり忘れているので、祝ってくれてすごく嬉しい!
バースデーソングなんていつぶりだろう。
めちゃ感動したよ!ほんとに有難う!
大好きだよ-!

前にも聞いたけど貴方の誕生日はいつだったっけ?
何度も聞いてごめんね。今度はスケジュール帳に書いとく。

そう、荷物届いたって前に言ってたよね。ごめんごめん。うっかりしてた。
今日の昼間、郵便局から電話があって、14日にちゃんと届いてるって言われた。
なんで追跡システムに反映されてないんだろう。謎だ…。
兎も角良かった。

英語

Yay! To my family and friends, even I forgot that it was my birthday, so thanks for celebrating for me!
I wonder how long it's been since someone sang the birthday song for me.
I am so touched! A BIG thank you to everyone!
I love you guys!

I think I already asked before, but when is your birthday again?
I'm sorry for asking again and again. I'll take note of it this time.

Yes, I think I told you before that the package arrived. Sorry for being so careless!
At noon today, I received a phone call from the post office and they told me that they sent the package to my place on the 14th.
I wonder why it doesn't show up properly on their tracking system...
Anyhow, I'm glad it did.

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yoppo1026 57 プロフィールをご覧いただき、誠にありがとうございます。 日本語ネイティブ...
yoppo1026はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2016/12/08 16:04:04

元の翻訳
Yay! To my family and friends, even I forgot that it was my birthday, so thanks for celebrating for me!
I wonder how long it's been since someone sang the birthday song for me.
I am so touched! A BIG thank you to everyone!
I love you guys!

I think I already asked before, but when is your birthday again?
I'm sorry for asking again and again. I'll take note of it this time.

Yes, I think I told you before that the package arrived. Sorry for being so careless!
At noon today, I received a phone call from the post office and they told me that they sent the package to my place on the 14th.
I wonder why it doesn't show up properly on their tracking system...
Anyhow, I'm glad it did.

修正後
Yay! To my family and friends, even I forgot that it was my birthday, so thanks for celebrating for me!
I wonder how long it's been since someone sang the birthday song for me.
I am so touched! A BIG thank you to everyone!
I love you guys!

I think I already asked before, but when is your birthday?
I'm sorry for asking again and again. I'll take note of it this time.

Yes, I think I told you before that the package arrived. Sorry for being so careless!
At noon today, I received a phone call from the post office and they told me that they sent the package to my place on the 14th.
I wonder why it doesn't show up properly on their tracking system...
Anyhow, I'm glad.

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