翻訳者レビュー ( 英語 → 日本語 )

英語

連絡ありがとうございます。○○ですが、日本での販売ペースが少し落ちています。前回購入しました450個のうち、まだ200個ほど在庫が残っている状況です。そのためもう少し在庫が減った時点で、あらたに注文をする予定です。再注文まで少しお待ちいただけますでしょうか。私はこれからもあなたと継続して取引をしたいと思っています。今後もよろしくお願いします。

日本語

Thank you for contacting me. This is ○○, and I regret to notify you that the sales pace in Japan has a bit slowed down. Of the 450 items I purchased last time, I still have 200 of them. So I will order again when the number of the items in our stock has become fewer. Would you wait a bit longer until I order again? I would like to maintain our trading between us longer. Thank you for your patience.

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tatsuoishimuraはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2016/10/01 22:45:18

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. This is ○○, and I regret to notify you that the sales pace in Japan has a bit slowed down. Of the 450 items I purchased last time, I still have 200 of them. So I will order again when the number of the items in our stock has become fewer. Would you wait a bit longer until I order again? I would like to maintain our trading between us longer. Thank you for your patience.↵

修正後
Thank you for contacting me. This is ○○, and I regret to notify you that the sales pace in Japan has a bit slowed down. Of the 450 items I purchased last time, I still have 200 of them. So I will order again when the number of the items in our stock has become fewer. Would you wait a bit longer until I order again? I would like to maintain our trading between us longer. Thank you for your patience in advance.

[bluejeans71]

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