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評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2016/08/19 13:19:17

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日本語

実店舗で販売されるのですか?
それともwebshopで販売されるのですか?
お金や商品のやり取りはどのようにする予定ですか?
ビジネスパートナーになるのならば、私はあなたの会社のことを詳しく知る必要があります。
私は9月〇日〇日に東京で行われるイベントに参加予定です。そこでアクセサリーを販売します。もし〇〇様がそこに来れるようでしたら、直接商品をお見せすることができます。ご都合はいかがでしょうか?

英語

Will you sell at the physical shop?
Or do you sell through webshop?
How are you going to handle money and items?
If we are to be business partners, I have to know details of your company.
I will join the event to be held on September ○ in Tokyo. I will sell accessories there. ○○, if you are coming there, I can directly show items. How is your schedule?

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unknownはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2016/08/20 13:26:35

元の翻訳
Will you sell at the physical shop?
Or do you sell through webshop?
How are you going to handle money and items?
If we are to be business partners, I have to know details of your company.
I will join the event to be held on September ○ in Tokyo. I will sell accessories there. ○○, if you are coming there, I can directly show items. How is your schedule?

修正後
Will you sell at a physical shop?
Or do you intend to sell through a webshop?
How are you going to handle money and items?
If we are to be business partners, I have to know about your company in detail.
I will attend an event to be held in Tokyo on September ○. I will sell accessories there. ○○, if you are coming there, I can show you items in person. How is your schedule?

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