翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

実店舗で販売されるのですか？
それともwebshopで販売されるのですか？
お金や商品のやり取りはどのようにする予定ですか？
ビジネスパートナーになるのならば、私はあなたの会社のことを詳しく知る必要があります。
私は9月〇日〇日に東京で行われるイベントに参加予定です。そこでアクセサリーを販売します。もし〇〇様がそこに来れるようでしたら、直接商品をお見せすることができます。ご都合はいかがでしょうか？

英語

Will you sell at the physical shop?
Or do you sell through webshop?
How are you going to handle money and items?
If we are to be business partners, I have to know details of your company.
I will join the event to be held on September ○ in Tokyo. I will sell accessories there. ○○, if you are coming there, I can directly show items. How is your schedule?

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2016/08/20 13:26:35

元の翻訳
Will you sell at the physical shop?
Or do you sell through webshop?
How are you going to handle money and items?
If we are to be business partners, I have to know details of your company.
I will join the event to be held on September ○ in Tokyo. I will sell accessories there. ○○, if you are coming there, I can directly show items. How is your schedule?

修正後
Will you sell at a physical shop?
Or do you intend to sell through a webshop?
How are you going to handle money and items?
If we are to be business partners, I have to know about your company in detail.
I will attend an event to be held in Tokyo on September ○. I will sell accessories there. ○○, if you are coming there, I can show you items in person. How is your schedule?