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評価: 44 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2016/07/22 10:04:03

ka28310
ka28310 44 長年、半導体(システムLSI)検証を手掛け、多くの英文ドキュメントに触れて...
日本語

まずあなたの気分を害したことを謝罪します。大変申し訳ありません。私は商品知識が詳しくありません。1600のラベルが貼られていたので、それが本当に1500なのか1600なのか判断することができません。そのため商品をそちらへ返送しました。それを理解していただきたいです。私はこれまで何度もあなたから商品を購入しています。支払いもすぐに済ませ、届いた商品にクレームを言ったことはありません。私は今後もあなたと良いビジネス関係を続けていきたいです。今後も取引を続けていただけませんか?

英語

I apologize that I hurt your feelings at first. I am deeply sorry about that. I have very little idea about items. As the label of 1600 was put on, I cannot decide whether it is really 1500 or 1600. Therefore I returned the item back to you. Please understand such circumstances. I have bought items from you many times. I always made payment right away, and I have never claimed anything to you about items. I would like to keep good relationship with you after now as well. Can you please keep dealing with me, either?

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ep_ntt_thuy 50 ベトナム語ネイティブである日本語・英語のフリーランス翻訳者Thuyと申しま...
ep_ntt_thuyはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2016/07/22 10:30:58

元の翻訳
I apologize that I hurt your feelings at first. I am deeply sorry about that. I have very little idea about items. As the label of 1600 was put on, I cannot decide whether it is really 1500 or 1600. Therefore I returned the item back to you. Please understand such circumstances. I have bought items from you many times. I always made payment right away, and I have never claimed anything to you about items. I would like to keep good relationship with you after now as well. Can you please keep dealing with me, either?

修正後
Firstly, I apologize that I hurt your feelings. I am deeply sorry about that. I have very little idea about the items. As the label of 1600 was put on, I cannot decide whether it is really 1500 or 1600. Therefore I returned the item back to you. Please understand such circumstances. I have bought items from you for many times. I always made payment right away, and I have never claimed anything to you about the items. I would like to keep good business relationship with you from now on as well. Can you please keep dealing with me, either?

ka28310 ka28310 2016/07/22 10:37:14

Hmm. I have too many omissions. I will try to be more careful.
BTW, recently I am happy if you jump in the first 2 translations because your translation is always better than other "regular" members (including me.) :)

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備考: 1500や1600というのは商品の型番です。