翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

○○ Silvia様

ご連絡ありがとうございます。
○○ Silvia様名義のカードにてご決済希望とのこと
承知いたしました。

ご注文時に登録のあったカード情報は
別の方のご名義　となっておりますため、
カード情報の変更が必要となります。

以下の手順にてお手続きください。

1　○○にログイン
2　画面左上のリンク『My Orders』をクリック
3　購入履歴画面の『Display　Detailed　Histoy』をクリック
4　『Change your order from here』をクリック

英語

Dear ○○ Silvia,
Thank you very much for contacting us.
We understand that you would like to pay by the card of the name of ○○ Silvia.

The card information which was registered at the order is another person's name, so you need to change the information.
Please proceed according to the below.
1 Log in 〇〇
2 Click "My Orders" in the link above the left side of the screen
3 Click "Display　Detailed　History" of the purchase record screen
4 Click "Change your order from here"

レビュー ( 1 )

bluejeans71はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2016/06/25 21:03:41

元の翻訳
Dear ○○ Silvia,
Thank you very much for contacting us.
We understand that you would like to pay by the card of the name of ○○ Silvia.

The card information which was registered at the order is another person's name, so you need to change the information.
Please proceed according to the below.
1 Log in 〇〇
2 Click "My Orders" in the link above the left side of the screen
3 Click "Display　Detailed　History" of the purchase record screen
4 Click "Change your order from here"

修正後
Dear ○○ Silvia,
Thank you very much for contacting us.
We understand that you would like to pay by the credit card registered as the name of ○○ Silvia.

You registered the credit card information for another person's name, so you need to change it.
Please proceed the following:
1 Log in 〇〇
2 Click "My Orders" in the link above the left side of the screen
3 Click "Display　Detailed　History" of the purchase record screen
4 Click "Change your order from here"

[atsuko-s]

添削いただきありがとうございます。