翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 「Aさん」は人の名前です

日本語

長期滞在のお問い合わせははじめてです！もちろん、私はあなたを歓迎するつもりです。
でも、その前に幾つか確認をさせてください。
まず、お掃除（ゴミ捨て）についてです。
例えば、毎週一回（月・水・金曜日のどれか）の11:00〜13:00の２時間に、私がお部屋の掃除をしてもよいでしょうか？
OKならば、月・水・金のどの曜日がよいか教えていただけますか？
もし、私が掃除をせずに、あなたがお掃除・ゴミ捨てをしていただるのであれば、清掃料金を割引させていただきます。

英語

It is first time for me to be offerd a long staying.
Ofcourse , you are welcome!
Please let me ask some questions.
The questions are about cleaning such as taking out the trash.
Can I clean up you room once a week?
I am thinking about Monday,Wednesday, or Friday.
I'm going to clean up your room in 2 hours while from 11am to 1pm.
Which day do you let me clean up your room?
If you think it is OK, please le me know the day for clean up.
If you clean up your room by yourself, I will give you discount of cleanup fee.

レビュー ( 1 )

miya-fuはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/12/26 22:39:34

元の翻訳
It is first time for me to be offerd a long staying.
Ofcourse , you are welcome!
Please let me ask some questions.
The questions are about cleaning such as taking out the trash.
Can I clean up you room once a week?
I am thinking about Monday,Wednesday, or Friday.
I'm going to clean up your room in 2 hours while from 11am to 1pm.
Which day do you let me clean up your room?
If you think it is OK, please le me know the day for clean up.
If you clean up your room by yourself, I will give you discount of cleanup fee.

修正後
It is the first time for me to be offered a long staying.
Of course , you are welcome!
Please let me ask some questions.
The questions are about cleaning such as taking out the trash.
Can I clean up you room once a week?
I am thinking about Monday,Wednesday, or Friday.
I'm going to clean up your room for 2 hours from 11am to 1pm.
Which day do you let me clean up your room?
If you think it is OK, please le me know the day for clean up.
If you clean up your room by yourself, I will give you a discount on the cleanup fee.

Keep up the good work!