翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

二箇所の検査機関に検査依頼をして、一つ目は問題なかったのですが二つ目は検査に通りませんでした。
そこで問題点は何か確認したところ圧着が甘かったため、袋が少し破れていたようで、それが原因で商品が酸化しているとの事でした。
検査を通過する為に永井が検査機関に書類を作って出す予定です。

英語

We requested two different organs to inspect it, and there was no problem in the first, but it did not pass the second inspection.
We then analysed the problem, and because the bonding was not tight enough, there was a small tear in the sack, causing the product to oxidate.
Nagai will issue a document to the inspection organ, so that the product passes the inspection.

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/09/25 21:12:33

元の翻訳
We requested two different organs to inspect it, and there was no problem in the first, but it did not pass the second inspection.
We then analysed the problem, and because the bonding was not tight enough, there was a small tear in the sack, causing the product to oxidate.
Nagai will issue a document to the inspection organ, so that the product passes the inspection.

修正後
We requested two different organization to inspect it, and there was no problem in the first, but it did not pass the second inspection.
We then analysed the problem, and because the bonding was not tight enough, there was a small tear in the sack, causing the product to oxidate.
Nagai will issue a document to the inspection organization, so that the product passes the inspection.