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評価: 59 / 1 Review / 2015/08/25 18:54:46
Order0728の配送はどうなっているのでしょうか?
私は7月28日にトムさん宛て注文をしました。
その際に、あなた方のミスにより私達が受け取っていないAも一緒に、8月25日までにこのオーダーを送ってくれと頼んでいます。あなたにもCCを入れています。
至急この時のオーダーとAを送ってくれませんか?
Aは本来7月に受け取っているべきものですので、これだけでも最優先で今週末にも送って欲しいです。
以下、7月28日に私とトムさんがやりとりしたメールを載せておきます。
How is your delivery of my order 0728 getting along?
I placed that order with Tom on July 28.
At that time, I asked him to ship that order by August 25 together with the A that we hadn't received because of your mistake. I also put you in my CC field then.
Will you ship that order and A immediately?
The A is what we should have received in July, so I want at least that thing on a top priority basis by the end of the week.
Following is a copy of the emails exchanged between Tom and myself on July 28.
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元の翻訳
How is your delivery of my order 0728 getting along?
I placed that order with Tom on July 28. ↵
At that time, I asked him to ship that order by August 25 together with the A that we hadn't received because of your mistake. I also put you in my CC field then.
Will you ship that order and A immediately?
The A is what we should have received in July, so I want at least that thing on a top priority basis by the end of the week.
Following is a copy of the emails exchanged between Tom and myself on July 28.
修正後
How is your delivery of my order 0728 getting along?
I placed the order with Tom on July 28, asking him to ship it by August 25, along with the A that we hadn't received because of a mistake on your part. I also put you in my CC field then.
Would you please ship the order and the A immediately?
We should really have received the A in July, so at the very least I would like that prioritized and shipped by the end of the week.
Following is a copy of the emails exchanged between Tom and myself on July 28.
Good work!
I've just made a few adjustments to make it sound more natural.
少しでも参考になれば幸いです。
Thank you, palaisdeverre, you're a fantastic reviewer. I've learned quite a lot from you. By the way, you're great at Japanese and play the koto too?! Impressive!
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad that you learned something! (: