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評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2015/08/01 00:30:35

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日本語

先日は長い電話にお付き合い頂き感謝してます

そこでお話させて頂いた項目の確認をお互いにしましょう

銀製のプレート製作許可 OK

インナープレートが今後全て黒になるが、銀色のタイプ発注

半金の支払いは納期1か月前で

00は今後も継続販売

次回の注文より金色の製作 (appleの金色希望)

アジア総代理権

現在00や百貨店より
オファーが多くありますが、そのが卸価格50%を要求されます
現在私達への卸は50%ですが、発注量もこれからも増えていきますので
次回より45%に落として頂けませんか。

英語

Thanks for your time for long telephone conversation the other day.

Let us check the articles we discussed then.

Silver plate production permission OK

Inner plate will be all black from now on, but silver type is to be ordered.

Half payment made one month before delivery.

00 sales will continue.

Production of gold from next order (apple requested gold)

Sole distributorship in Asia.

Currently there are many offers from 00 and department stores, but required wholesale price is 50%.
At the moment our wholesale price is 50%, but will you drop it to 45% provided that the order quantity will increase.

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973 50 I spare no effort to offer quality tr...
tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/08/02 03:43:02

元の翻訳
Thanks for your time for long telephone conversation the other day.

Let us check the articles we discussed then.

Silver plate production permission OK

Inner plate will be all black from now on, but silver type is to be ordered.

Half payment made one month before delivery.

00 sales will continue.

Production of gold from next order (apple requested gold)

Sole distributorship in Asia.

Currently there are many offers from 00 and department stores, but required wholesale price is 50%.
At the moment our wholesale price is 50%, but will you drop it to 45% provided that the order quantity will increase.

修正後
Thanks for your time for long telephone conversation the other day.

Let us check the items we discussed then.

Silver plate production permission OK

Inner plate will be all black from now on, but silver type is to be ordered.

Half payment to be made one month before delivery.

00 sales will continue.

Production of the ones in gold from the next order (apple in gold requested)

Sole distributorship in Asia.

Currently there are many offers from 00 and department stores, but they request 50% off wholesale price.
At the moment you offer us 50% off wholesale price, but we appreciate it if you could offer 55% off wholesale price since we will increase the order quantity.

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