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評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 2 Reviews / 2015/04/07 10:41:38

ishiotoko
ishiotoko 52 Hi, I can handle Japanese, English, a...
日本語

KODA KUMI VISAカードリニューアル！会場先行受付スタート！

KODA KUMI VISAカードがデザインをリニューアルして登場！

Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 ～WALK OF MY LIFE～ supported by Mercedes-Benz全会場にて、来場者限定先行入会受付を実施致します！

お申込み頂いたお客様には「オリジナルポストカード」をプレゼント！

英語

KODA KUMI VISA CARD has got renewed! Advance reservation at the venue has got strarted!

KODA KUMI VISA CARD has appeared with renewing the design!

At all venue of Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 -WALK OF MY LIFE- supported by Mercedes-Benz,
advance reservation will be held!

All customers who apply KODA KUMI VISA CARD will get "Original post card" as a present!

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ctplers99 64 フリーランス翻訳者Ctplers99と申します。日本語ネイティブで、翻訳者...
ctplers99はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/04/08 10:41:02

元の翻訳
KODA KUMI VISA CARD has got renewed! Advance reservation at the venue has got strarted!

KODA KUMI VISA CARD has appeared with renewing the design!

At all venue of Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 -WALK OF MY LIFE- supported by Mercedes-Benz,
advance reservation will be held!

All customers who apply KODA KUMI VISA CARD will get "Original post card" as a present!

修正後
KODA KUMI VISA CARD has got renewed! Advance reservation at the venue has got strarted!

KODA KUMI VISA CARD has appeared with renewing the design!

At all venue of Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 -WALK OF MY LIFE- supported by Mercedes-Benz,
advance reservation will be held only for visitors!

All customers who apply KODA KUMI VISA CARD will get "Original post card" as a present!

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/04/08 13:35:20

元の翻訳
KODA KUMI VISA CARD has got renewed! Advance reservation at the venue has got strarted!

KODA KUMI VISA CARD has appeared with renewing the design!

At all venue of Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 -WALK OF MY LIFE- supported by Mercedes-Benz,↵
advance reservation will be held!

All customers who apply KODA KUMI VISA CARD will get "Original post card" as a present!

修正後
The KODA KUMI VISA CARD has been renewed! Advance reservation at the venue has strarted!

KODA KUMI VISA CARD has appeared with a renewed design!

At all venues of Koda Kumi 15th Anniversary Live Tour 2015 -WALK OF MY LIFE- sponsored by Mercedes-Benz, advance reservation will be held!

All customers who apply for KODA KUMI VISA CARD will receive an "original post card" as a present!

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備考: アーティスト名は「KUMI KODA」に統一下さい。
全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。