翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

あの人、ライン、課には 任せておけない。
あの会社には任せておけない → 取引き停止
異常の内容によっては自動車の事故につながり、命までうばう結果になる。
異常の報告と処置
異常が発生した場合は作業を中止し、いち早く上司に報告する。
発見者は速やかにルールどおり報告する。
報告が遅れるほど損失は大きくなる。
異常内容を記録する。
課長は全ての異常を把握。
他の部署で同じようなことを防ぐため、情報連絡とやるべきことをルール化する。

作る人のチョットした注意力でほとんどの不良が発見可能である
再発防止

英語

The person, the line, and the division are not reliable. The company cannot be trusted → termination of business relationship.
A defect, depending on what really it is, may lead to an car accident and even end up taking away a person's life.
Report and procedure for defects
When a trouble occurred, stop the operation and immediately report to the supervisor.
A person who discovered it should report at once according to the rule.
The later the report is made, the bigger the loss becomes.
Record the details of the trouble.
The division manager should understand all of the troubles.
To prevent the same trouble happening again at tother divisions, make it a rule to share the information and manualize what to do.

A little attention of those who manufacture products can find almost any defect.
Prevention of recurrence.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/17 03:09:47

元の翻訳
The person, the line, and the division are not reliable. The company cannot be trusted → termination of business relationship.
A defect, depending on what really it is, may lead to an car accident and even end up taking away a person's life.
Report and procedure for defects
When a trouble occurred, stop the operation and immediately report to the supervisor.
A person who discovered it should report at once according to the rule.
The later the report is made, the bigger the loss becomes.
Record the details of the trouble.
The division manager should understand all of the troubles.
To prevent the same trouble happening again at tother divisions, make it a rule to share the information and manualize what to do.

A little attention of those who manufacture products can find almost any defect.
Prevention of recurrence.

修正後
The person, the line, and the division are not reliable. The company cannot be trusted → termination of business relationship.
A defect, depending on what really it is, may lead to a car accident and even end up taking away a person's life.
Report and procedure for defects
When a trouble occurs, stop the operation and immediately report to the supervisor.
A person who discovered it should report at once according to the rule.
The later the report is made, the bigger the loss becomes.
Record the details of the trouble.
The division manager should understand all of the troubles.
To keep the same trouble from happening again at other divisions, make it a rule to share the information and manualize what to do.

A little attention of those who manufacture products can find almost any defect.
Prevention of recurrence.