翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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日本語

"最高"
今回は、卒業旅行としてパリ、ロンドン、オランダを訪れました。そしてオランダ発ベルギー観光という1日で他の国も観光することができるという時間のない私たちにとって本当に素晴らしいツアーを発見したので、迷わず参加させていただきました。まず、言葉も場所もわからない土地、オランダでの集合。きちんとたどり着けるかとても不安でした。でも、集合場所が非常にわかりやすい所にあり、すぐにたどり着けて一安心。ベルギーに着くと、馬や白鳥がいたり、きれいな街並みがありました。

英語

"Superb!"
This time, we visited Paris, London and Holland as a graduation trip. And we can visit other countries in a day as Belguim Sightseeing from Holland. That was really a wonderful trip. So I participated in it. At the beginning, we did not know the languages and places, and had to gather in Holland. I worried to be able to arrive properly. But we could arrived there soon safely because we could find a meeting place easily. And there were horses, swans and beautiful streets and houses in Holland.

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/29 22:39:28

元の翻訳
"Superb!"
This time, we visited Paris, London and Holland as a graduation trip. And we can visit other countries in a day as Belguim Sightseeing from Holland. That was really a wonderful trip. So I participated in it. At the beginning, we did not know the languages and places, and had to gather in Holland. I worried to be able to arrive properly. But we could arrived there soon safely because we could find a meeting place easily. And there were horses, swans and beautiful streets and houses in Holland.

修正後
"Superb!"
This time, we visited Paris, London and Holland as a graduation trip. And we can visit other countries in a day to Belguim sightseeing from Holland. That was really a wonderful trip. So I participated it without doubt. At the beginning, we did not know the languages and places, and had to gather in Holland. I worried to be able to arrive properly. But we could arrived there soon safely because we could find a meeting place easily. And there were horses, swans and beautiful streets and houses in Holland.

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Thank you very much for your review!