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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/12/28 15:39:13

gelito_111379
gelito_111379 52 My named sounds girlie! I hope to lea...
日本語

こんにちわ
わざわざお返事を頂きありがとうございます
この度は商品が届くのが遅れてしまったことで
満足して頂けずに申し訳ありません
商品ができるだけ早く届くことを
心待ちにしていたお客様の気持ちを考えると
ただただ残念なばかりです
フィードバックはそのままで構いません
今後のビジネスの参考にさせて頂きます


この度は私のショップを御利用頂きありがとうございます
本日EMSにて商品を発送しました
こちらの商品は日本でも人気の高い商品です
到着までしばらくの間お待ち下さい
宜しくお願いします

英語

Greetings.
Thank you very much for taking the time to respond.
I am extremely sorry that you were dissatisfied for the delayed arrival of the product.
When I think about how you feel on having the product be delivered as early as possible, I am very disappointed.
The feedback is fine as it is.
I will use it as reference for my future business transactions.

Thank you very much for patronizing my shop.
I shipped the product via EMS today.
This is a very popular product even among the Japanese people.
Please kindly wait for it's arrival.
Thank you.

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yakuok 60 ・日英・英日翻訳・通訳。 ・海外の国際校で教育を受け、イギリス英語・アメ...
yakuokはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/12/30 01:08:48

元の翻訳
Greetings.
Thank you very much for taking the time to respond.
I am extremely sorry that you were dissatisfied for the delayed arrival of the product.
When I think about how you feel on having the product be delivered as early as possible, I am very disappointed.
The feedback is fine as it is.
I will use it as reference for my future business transactions.

Thank you very much for patronizing my shop.
I shipped the product via EMS today.
This is a very popular product even among the Japanese people.
Please kindly wait for it's arrival.
Thank you.

修正後
Greetings.
Thank you very much for taking the time to respond.
I am extremely sorry that you were dissatisfied for the delayed arrival of the product.
When I think about how you feel on having the product be delivered as early as possible, I am very disappointed.
The feedback is fine as it is.
I will use it as reference for my future business transactions.

Thank you very much for patronizing my shop.
I shipped the product via EMS today.
This is a very popular product even among the Japanese people.
Please kindly wait for its arrival.
Thank you.

分かりやすい訳だと思います。

gelito_111379 gelito_111379 2014/12/30 01:10:35

Thank you!!!!!

yakuok yakuok 2014/12/30 01:11:27

You're welcome ^^

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