翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 50 / 2 Reviews / 2014/11/10 21:33:03
10月3日に購入した商品は、本日到着致しました。
しかし、10月24日に購入した商品はまだ届いておりません。いつ頃、こちらへ到着するか目安を教えて下さい。
The good I purchased at October 3 has arrived today.
But the good I purchased at October 24 is not arrived yet. Let me know when this will be delivered.
レビュー ( 2 )
元の翻訳
The good I purchased at October 3 has arrived today.
But the good I purchased at October 24 is not arrived yet. Let me know when this will be delivered.
修正後
The good [usage] I purchased at [wrong proposition] October 3 has arrived today.
But the good [usage] I purchased at [wrong proposition] October 24 is not arrived [tense confusion] yet. Let me know when this will be delivered.
元の翻訳
The good I purchased at October 3 has arrived today.
But the good I purchased at October 24 is not arrived yet. Let me know when this will be delivered.
修正後
The goods I purchased on October 3 has arrived today.
But the other one I purchased on October 24 has not been delivered yet. Let me know when this will be delivered.
商品は単数でも複数でもgoodsとなります。