翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 50 / ネイティブ 中国語(繁体字) / 1 Review / 2014/10/16 11:52:24
外国からの知人が訪日。どこにしようかまよったけど
定価より安かったので、ここにしました。 結果は....とてもよかった。
外国の知人は大喜びで写真を撮りまくってました。
ただ、演目間のビールの追加注文は全員にまわらない（時間がないし、スタッフも少ない）ので、演目始まる前に2本くらい買っておいたほうが便利かも。
総合的には大満足です！！
My foreign friend came to Japan. Although I couldn't come up with a good place at first, because it was cheaper than the standard price, so I decided on here. The result was superb!
My foreign friend enjoyed a lot and took tons of pictures.
While the additional order of bear didn't reach everybody( because of the lack of time and staff on hand), during the program, it might have been better to buy 2 bottles of bear before the program began.
But all in all it was wonderful!
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元の翻訳
My foreign friend came to Japan. Although I couldn't come up with a good place at first, because it was cheaper than the standard price, so I decided on here. The result was superb!
My foreign friend enjoyed a lot and took tons of pictures.
While the additional order of bear didn't reach everybody( because of the lack of time and staff on hand), during the program, it might have been better to buy 2 bottles of bear before the program began.
But all in all it was wonderful!
修正後
My foreign friend came to Japan. Although I couldn't come up with a good place at first, because it was cheaper than the standard price, so I decided on this place. The result was superb!
My foreign friend enjoyed a lot and took tons of pictures.
While the additional order of bear didn't reach everybody( because of the lack of time and staff on hand), during the program, it might have been better to buy 2 bottles of bear before the program began.
But all in all it was wonderful!
hereを使うと、「ここで決定した」というニュアンスになるかもしれません。
ご訂正、ありがとうございます！
ニュアンスの確認が甘かったです。今度からは気をつけます！