翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/10/10 11:32:05
こんにちは。
日本在住の○○と言います。御社のHPをたまたま見つけて購入したいと思っております。
御社のHPで買い物ができないみたいですが、どの様にすれば買うことができるでしょうか?
また日本で買い物は可能でしょうか?
Hello.
My name is ○○ living in Japan. I happened to find your HP and want to purchase something.
It seems that I can’t shop on your HP. What can I do for shopping?
Also is it possible for me to do shopping in Japan?
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元の翻訳
Hello.
My name is ○○ living in Japan. I happened to find your HP and want to purchase something.
It seems that I can’t shop on your HP. What can I do for shopping?
Also is it possible for me to do shopping in Japan?
修正後
Hello.
My name is ○○ living in Japan. I happened to find your company page and want to purchase your products.
It seems that I can’t shop on your page. How can I make purchases?
Also is it possible for me to do shopping in Japan?
Thank you for your review.