翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/09/27 00:55:42
日本語
注文した商品が届きません。
すぐに返金してください。
注文した商品が配達予定日を過ぎても到着しません。
英語
The ordered merchandise is not arriving.
I would like a refund now
Even though the scheduled delivery date has expired, the merchandise is not coming.
レビュー ( 1 )
tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました
2014/09/28 01:20:37
元の翻訳
The ordered merchandise is not arriving.
I would like a refund now
Even though the scheduled delivery date has expired, the merchandise is not coming.
修正後
The ordered merchandise has not arrived yet.
Please issue a refund immediately.
Although the expected delivery date has expired, the merchandise has not arrived yet.
Be careful with the tense (i.e. "is not arriving"--> "has not arrived").