翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

"aaa"と"bbb"の２つとも、10％値引きすることができます。
両方買っていただいた場合は、書留なしのSAL便でよろしければ送料込でXXXドルにいたします（air mailならプラスxxxドル, emsならプラスxxxドル）。
ご検討ください。よろしくお願いします。

英語

We can give 10 percent discount for both "aaa" and "bbb".
If you purchase both, we will make it at xxx dollars including shipping charge if you
don't mind about sending it by SAL without registered mail.(in case of air mail, it is plus xxx dollars and in case of EMS, it is plus xxx dollars).
We hope that you consider it. We appreciate your understanding.

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tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/20 15:31:08

元の翻訳
We can give 10 percent discount for both "aaa" and "bbb".
If you purchase both, we will make it at xxx dollars including shipping charge if you
don't mind about sending it by SAL without registered mail.(in case of air mail, it is plus xxx dollars and in case of EMS, it is plus xxx dollars).
We hope that you consider it. We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
We can give 10 percent discount for both "aaa" and "bbb".
If you purchase both, we will make it at xxx dollars including shipping charge if you
don't mind about sending it by SAL without registered mail (additional xxx dollars in the case of air mail, or additional xxx dollars in the case of EMS).
Please take this into your consideration. Thank you and best regards.