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日本語

移動する大仏…宙に浮かんだ貴重な瞬間

2014年9月6日、愛知・名古屋市の八事山興正寺で行われた「入仏式」。クレーンでつるされた大仏が、まるで空中浮遊のごとく移動し、無事に鎮座するまでの映像です。

英語

Moving big buddha statue....The precious moment that it floats in the air

"Nyubutsu-shiki" (consecration ceremony) held on September 6, 2014 at Yagoto mountain Koshoji temple. This video shows the big buddha statue suspended by a crane moving as if it were floating in the sky and then successfully located in the temple.

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tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/13 16:44:43

元の翻訳
Moving big buddha statue....The precious moment that it floats in the air

"Nyubutsu-shiki" (consecration ceremony) held on September 6, 2014 at Yagoto mountain Koshoji temple. This video shows the big buddha statue suspended by a crane moving as if it were floating in the sky and then successfully located in the temple.

修正後
The moving great statue of Buddha....The precious moment that it floats in the air

"Nyubutsu-shiki" (consecration ceremony) held on September 6, 2014 at Yagoto mountain Koshoji temple. This video shows the great statue of Buddha suspended by a crane moving as if it were floating in the air and then safely enshrined in the temple.

細かい用語の対訳を調べるのは大変だったと思いますが、丁寧に仕上がっていると思います。Buddhaは必ず大文字で、the Great Buddha, the great statue of Buddhaなどと表現されています。ご参考まで。

[3_yumie7]

レビューありがとうございました。