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日本語

ご連絡ありがとうございます。

商品については、金曜日に EMS で発送済みです。
金曜日に Amazon からメールを送付しましたが、届いておりませんでしょうか？

EMS item number : EG?????????JP

先ほど確認したところ、既にアメリカに荷物は届いているようです。
「8/9 8:44 国際交換局から発送」となっているので、もうそれほど日数はかからない
と思います。

大変恐縮ですが、今しばらくお待ちいただきたく、よろしくお願いいたします。

英語

Thank you for your inquiry.
I've already delivered the product by EMS on friday.
I sent message from Amazon, Didn't you get that?
EMS item number : EG?????????JP
I confirmed that the product should have been delivered to US already.
And they say "Departure from inward office of exchange will be on August 9 08:99" so I think it won't take so long.
Excuse me, Could I have you wait for a moment? Thank you.

レビュー ( 2 )

ashleywestはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/11 10:53:35

Good!

[futomomo]

Thanks!

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/11 19:45:26

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
I've already delivered the product by EMS on friday.
I sent message from Amazon, Didn't you get that?
EMS item number : EG?????????JP
I confirmed that the product should have been delivered to US already.
And they say "Departure from inward office of exchange will be on August 9 08:99" so I think it won't take so long.
Excuse me, Could I have you wait for a moment? Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.
I've already shipped the product by EMS on Friday.
Have received the email notification I sent you from Amazon?
EMS item number : EG?????????JP
I confirmed that the product seems to have been delivered in US already.
And they say "Shipped from national exchange at 8:44 on August 9", so it should not take so long.
We are very sorry to keep you waiting, but your patience is appreciated for a little longer. Thank you.

こまかい部分を提出前に確認なさるとよりよい文章になります。

[futomomo]

ご指摘ありがとうございます。以後気を付けるとともに参考にさせていただきます。