翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/07/15 15:09:19

日本語

<顔写真付き身分証明書として認められるもの>
○運転免許証
○パスポート
○写真付クレジットカード
○写真付住民基本台帳カード
○写真付学生証
※全てコピー及び期限切れは不可。
(NG:タスポ、社員証)

英語

Followings will be recognized as a paper with the photographs of the face
○Drivers licence
○Passport
○Credit card with photographs of the face
○Citizen identification card with photographs of the face
○Student identification card with photographs of the face
※All expired will be disapproved.
(Disapproved :taspo, staff identity card)

レビュー ( 1 )

acdcasic 60 こんにちは、遠藤です。日⇔英訳対応が可能なバイリンガルで、翻訳歴は5年です...
acdcasicはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/07/16 21:21:54

元の翻訳
Followings will be recognized as a paper with the photographs of the face
○Drivers licence
○Passport
○Credit card with photographs of the face
○Citizen identification card with photographs of the face
○Student identification card with photographs of the face
※All expired will be disapproved.
(Disapproved :taspo, staff identity card)

修正後
<Acceptable photo identification cards>
○Driver's license
○Passport
○Credit card with photograph
○Basic Resident Registration Card with photograph
○Student identification card with photograph
※No photocopy or expired card will be accepted.
(Not accepted: Taspo, company-issued identification card)

futomomo futomomo 2014/07/17 06:59:12

Thank you so much!I just start translating, and have much mistakes. Now I learn much from your correction.

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