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日本語

海外セミナーで報奨旅行誘致


ちば国際コンベンションビューローは、日本政府観光局主催の「インドネシア・ジャカルタ訪日インセンティブセミナー」と「台湾インセンティブ旅行現地セミナー」に参加し、プロモーション活動を実施。

大型インセンティブ旅行の潜在市場が高い、インドネシアと台湾のセミナーに職員を派遣し、「MICE 都市 千葉」の認知度向上と MICE 案件獲得に向けて、千葉の魅力を海外のバイヤーに直接 PRする。
東南アジアからの観光客は訪日旅行者も対前年比34.8%増と成長している。

英語

Calling for Incentive tours in overseas seminars

Chiba International Convention Bureau took part in a seminars: "Indonesia Jakarta Incentive tours to Japan" and "Taiwan Incentive Tours local seminar" held by Japan National Tourist Organization (JNTO).

As Indonesia and Taiwan has enormous potential markets for incentive tours, the bureau has sent staffs to the seminars in Indonesia and Taiwan, made a promotion of Chiba prefecture to overseas buyers in order to let them know "MICE City Chiba" and get MICE matters.
The number of travelers from southeast Asia to Japan grows 34.8 percent more compared to the previous year.

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ryojiyonoはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/01 14:53:34

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Calling for Incentive tours in overseas seminars

Chiba International Convention Bureau took part in a seminars: "Indonesia Jakarta Incentive tours to Japan" and "Taiwan Incentive Tours local seminar" held by Japan National Tourist Organization (JNTO).

As Indonesia and Taiwan has enormous potential markets for incentive tours, the bureau has sent staffs to the seminars in Indonesia and Taiwan, made a promotion of Chiba prefecture to overseas buyers in order to let them know "MICE City Chiba" and get MICE matters.
The number of travelers from southeast Asia to Japan grows 34.8 percent more compared to the previous year.

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Calling for Incentive tours in overseas seminars

Chiba International Convention Bureau made a promotion by taking part in a seminars: "Indonesia Jakarta Incentive tours to Japan" and "Taiwan Incentive Tours local seminar" held by Japan National Tourist Organization (JNTO).

As Indonesia and Taiwan has enormous potential markets for incentive tours, the bureau has sent staffs to the seminars in Indonesia and Taiwan, made a promotion of Chiba prefecture to overseas buyers in order to let them know "MICE City Chiba" and get MICE matters.
The number of travelers from southeast Asia to Japan grows 34.8 percent more compared to the previous year.

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