翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: アーティスト名は「AAA」に統一下さい。全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。

日本語

大阪　BIGCAT


スタンディング 整理番号付き/￥5,650(税込)
別途ドリンク代必要 /1枚
※3歳以上有料

夢番地

英語

Osaka BIGCAT


Standing with with reference number/￥5,650 (tax included)
Fees for additional drink needed
※Charges for children older than 3 years needed

Dream address

レビュー ( 1 )

linne0213はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/23 01:05:57

元の翻訳
Osaka BIGCAT


Standing with with reference number/￥5,650 (tax included)
Fees for additional drink needed
※Charges for children older than 3 years needed

Dream address

修正後
Osaka BIGCAT


Standing with reference number/￥5,650 (tax included)
Fees for a drink needed
※Charges applied for those who older than 3 years old

Yume Banchi

夢番地 is a proper noun, so it's better to spell it in Roma-ji.
Charges aren't limited to kids but adults, so I changed the way of writing.
I guess you already noticed this, but the customer must order a drink which is not included in the fee.
Overall translation quality is very good.