翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: IT関連の記事です。

日本語

障害物
今回実験した障害物は、以下の4種類です。
鉄（キャビネット、冷蔵庫、ドア、エレベーター）
肉（人体）
水（風呂）
砂（公園の砂場）

調査開始

①　鉄　（キャビネット、冷蔵庫、ドア、エレベーター）
さっそくオフィスにある色々な鉄で実験開始です。
まず手始めにスチール製の袖机で試します。

難なくクリア。
お次は一般家庭用サイズの冷蔵庫にトライ。
問題なく通知出来ました。
まだまだ余裕ですね。

割りと丈夫そうなビルのドアはどうでしょうか。
画面が切り替りました。まだ電波が届いているようです。

英語

Obstacles
The obstacles we experimented this time are these four objects below.
Iron (cabinet, refrigerator, door, elevator)
Meat (human body)
Water (bath)
Sand (sand at park)

Research starts

① Iron (cabinet, refrigerator, door, elevator)
We started the experiment with many items made of iron in the office.
First we tried with a desk made of steel.

We succeeded without any difficulty.
The next one is a refrigerator for general household.
It was successful again without any problem.
It seems like we can do more.

Since we thought it is pretty tough, we tried with a door in a building.
The screen was changed, and we could see that it received the wave.

レビュー ( 1 )

yuko_kuboderaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/16 13:33:00

元の翻訳
Obstacles
The obstacles we experimented this time are these four objects below.
Iron (cabinet, refrigerator, door, elevator)
Meat (human body)
Water (bath)
Sand (sand at park)

Research starts

① Iron (cabinet, refrigerator, door, elevator)
We started the experiment with many items made of iron in the office.
First we tried with a desk made of steel.

We succeeded without any difficulty.
The next one is a refrigerator for general household.
It was successful again without any problem.
It seems like we can do more.

Since we thought it is pretty tough, we tried with a door in a building.
The screen was changed, and we could see that it received the wave.

修正後
Obstacles
The obstacles we experimented this time are these four objects below.
Iron (cabinet, refrigerator, door, elevator)
Meat (human body)
Water (bath)
Sand (sand at park)

Research starts

① Iron (cabinet, refrigerator, door, elevator)
We started the experiment with many items made of iron in the office.
First we tried with a desk made of steel.

We succeeded without any difficulty.
The next one is a refrigerator for general household.
It was successful again without any problem.
It seems like we can do more.

How about a door in a building which we thought it is pretty tough?
The screen was changed, and we could see that it received the wave.

日本語の情報が限られている中で、上手に翻訳出来ていると思いました。翻訳の提案として一部添削をさせて頂きました。