翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

"くららさんでしょ？最近よくテレビに出るようになった。霊能者ってやつだろ？"
"ああ。そう そう。 みちるさんは怖いのが苦手なの？"
"うん、悪いなんだよ。どうして女は女を見る目がああも厳しいんだろう？いい女なのに..."
"あ、みちるさんが嫌なのは人の方なの..."
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文句があんならてめぇ一人で玉葱でも噛ってな。
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あの復讐は子供ながらに震えたね。
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読んでなら、読んでる場合じゃねえと思って。

英語

"She is Kurara, isn't she? Recently I saw her on TV often. She is a medium, isn't she?"
"Yeah. Don't you like supernatural things, Michiru?"
"Yes. Why are women strict with other women? I think she is a fine woman."
"Ah, I understand. You dislike that woman."
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If you have a complaint, bite onions by yourself.
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Child as I was, that revenge terrified me.
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This is not thetime to read it.

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/27 19:31:40

元の翻訳
"She is Kurara, isn't she? Recently I saw her on TV often. She is a medium, isn't she?"
"Yeah. Don't you like supernatural things, Michiru?"
"Yes. Why are women strict with other women? I think she is a fine woman."
"Ah, I understand. You dislike that woman."
*
If you have a complaint, bite onions by yourself.
*
Child as I was, that revenge terrified me.
*
This is not thetime to read it.

修正後
"She is Kurara, isn't she? Recently I have seen her on TV often. She is a medium, isn't she?"
"Yeah. Don't you like supernatural things, Michiru?"
"Yes. Why are women strict with other women? I think she is a fine woman."
"Ah, I understand. You dislike that woman."
*
If you have a complaint, bite onions by yourself.
*
Child as I was, that revenge terrified me.
*
This is not the time to read it.

良い翻訳だと思います！