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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/05/15 00:38:11

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日本語

#habit

先月購入した商品のうち1点に不具合がありましたのでご連絡させていただきました。
商品名:

クラウンに2点のキズ、へこみがあり、このままでは新品は販売できません。(画像を添付しますのでご確認ください。)
訳あり品としてこちらで処分しますので、割引していただく事は可能でしょうか?
こちらの希望は$30の値引きです。
もし難しいようであれば返品をお願い致します。
ご面倒をおかけしますが、何卒ご検討の程宜しくお願い致します。

英語

#habit

There was one defect from the product I have purchased from you last month so I have contacted you.
Product Name :

There are 2 scratches and dents on the crown and I cannot sell this as a new product. (I am attaching a photo so please kindly confirm. )
I will dispose of it as a "not quite perfect" product so is it possible for you to provide a discount?
I am hoping for a $30 discount.
If this won't be possible, then I will ask for a product return.
Sorry for the trouble, but I request for your support.

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hideyukiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/15 13:04:58

元の翻訳
#habit

There was one defect from the product I have purchased from you last month so I have contacted you.
Product Name :

There are 2 scratches and dents on the crown and I cannot sell this as a new product. (I am attaching a photo so please kindly confirm. )
I will dispose of it as a "not quite perfect" product so is it possible for you to provide a discount?
I am hoping for a $30 discount.
If this won't be possible, then I will ask for a product return.
Sorry for the trouble, but I request for your support.

修正後
#habit

There was one defect from the product I have purchased from you last month, so I have contacted you.
Product Name :

There are 2 scratches and dents on the crown and I cannot sell this as a new product. (I am attaching a photo, so please kindly confirm them. )
I will dispose of it as a "not quite perfect" product so is it possible for you to provide a discount?
I am hoping for a $30 discount.
If this won't be possible, then I will ask for a product return.
Sorry for the trouble, but I request for your support (Thank you for your consideration).

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