翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

この度は、出航の手続きが遅くなり、申し訳ありません。
5/3のJEVIC検査の結果、ちょっとした修理が必要になり、本日2回目の検査を受けました。結果、前回は引っ掛からなかったのですが、オイル漏れが指摘されました。これは、以前にお話ししていたことです。これを修理しないと検査に通りませんので、修理します。できるだけ5/15の船積みに間に合わせたいと思いますが、最終スケジュールはあらためてご連絡します。日本は、ゴールデンウィークがあったため手続きが遅くなりましたが、ご理解下さい。

英語

We are sorry that procedure has been slow this time.
A minor little repair is required because of the result of JEVIC inspection on May 3rd. We had it go through the second inspection today. As a result, although it past the inspection last time an oil leak has been pointed out this time. I told you about this before. I am going to repair it because, otherwise it will not pass the inspection.
We are very interested in makeshift shipping on May 15th as much as possible, but will contact you again regading the final schedule. The procedure Japan is now slow because there was a Golden Week Holidays. please understand.

レビュー ( 2 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/12 23:24:09

元の翻訳
We are sorry that procedure has been slow this time.
A minor little repair is required because of the result of JEVIC inspection on May 3rd. We had it go through the second inspection today. As a result, although it past the inspection last time an oil leak has been pointed out this time. I told you about this before. I am going to repair it because, otherwise it will not pass the inspection.
We are very interested in makeshift shipping on May 15th as much as possible, but will contact you again regading the final schedule. The procedure Japan is now slow because there was a Golden Week Holidays. please understand.

修正後
We are sorry that procedure has been slow this time.
A minor little repair is required because of the result of JEVIC inspection on May 3rd. We had it go through the second inspection today. As a result, although it passed the inspection last time, an oil leak has been pointed out this time. I told you about this before. I am going to repair it otherwise it will not pass the inspection.
We are very interested in makeshift shipping on May 15th as much as possible, but will contact you again regarding the final schedule. The procedure Japan is now slow because there was a Golden Week Holidays. please understand.

[[削除済みユーザ]]

レビューを書いていただきありがとうございます。大変勉強になります。これからもご指導、よろしくお願いいたします。

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/13 00:15:15

元の翻訳
We are sorry that procedure has been slow this time.
A minor little repair is required because of the result of JEVIC inspection on May 3rd. We had it go through the second inspection today. As a result, although it past the inspection last time an oil leak has been pointed out this time. I told you about this before. I am going to repair it because, otherwise it will not pass the inspection.
We are very interested in makeshift shipping on May 15th as much as possible, but will contact you again regading the final schedule. The procedure Japan is now slow because there was a Golden Week Holidays. please understand.

修正後
We are sorry that procedure for the shipment has been delayed this time.
A minor little repair is required because of the result of JEVIC inspection on May 3rd. We had it go through the second inspection today. As a result, although it passed the inspection last time an oil leak has been pointed out this time. I told you about this before. I am going to repair it because, otherwise it will not pass the inspection.
We are very interested in makeshift shipping on May 15th as much as possible, but will contact you again regarding the final schedule. The procedure Japan is now slow because there was a Golden Week Holidays. please understand.

[[削除済みユーザ]]

レビューをしていただきありがとうございます。通常は時間を十分とり見直しの上見直すのですが、早めにスターターを切り上げたいため少々無理がたたりミスが目立ちました。初心を忘れないよう心がけます！