翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

◯BDでの活動案
BD協会の設立及び、学校の設立
病院、大学での実施指導

◯Pへの要望
　団体の政府の認可及び推薦
　活動支援
　学校運営
　Drの募集

◯日本側が提供できること
　技術指導
　日本人医師の派遣
　日本への研修生受け入れ

◯時間
６月関係者会議　（Dr、政府関係者）

８月　第２回関係者会議　（カリキュラム、指導内容、サポート体制の確定）

１０月　学校の設立　病院との提携　大学との提携



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英語

◯ Proposed activities at the BD
the establishment of the BD Association and the establishment of school
Implementation guidance at hospitals and at universities

◯ Requests for P
Recommendation and approval of the government on the organization
Activity support
Management of schools
Recruit of Dr

◯ Things the Japanese side can provide
Technical guidance
Dispatch of Japanese doctors
Bringing in trainees in Japan

◯ Time
June: stakeholder meeting (Doctors, government officials)
August: 2nd stakeholder meeting
(Fix curriculum, teaching content, and the support system)
October: establishment of school, partnership with hospital, and partnership with universities,

If you can be agree with these proposals, please send us a letter of BD stakeholders in their joint names as a gesture confirmation.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/24 02:54:09

元の翻訳
◯ Proposed activities at the BD
the establishment of the BD Association and the establishment of school
Implementation guidance at hospitals and at universities

◯ Requests for P
Recommendation and approval of the government on the organization
Activity support
Management of schools
Recruit of Dr

◯ Things the Japanese side can provide
Technical guidance
Dispatch of Japanese doctors
Bringing in trainees in Japan

◯ Time
June: stakeholder meeting (Doctors, government officials)
August: 2nd stakeholder meeting
(Fix curriculum, teaching content, and the support system)
October: establishment of school, partnership with hospital, and partnership with universities,

If you can be agree with these proposals, please send us a letter of BD stakeholders in their joint names as a gesture confirmation.

修正後
◯ Proposed activities at the BD
The establishment of the BD Association and the establishment of school
Implementation guidance at hospitals and at universities

◯ Requests for P
Recommendation and approval of the government on the organization
Activity support
Management of schools
Recruit of doctors

◯ Things the Japanese side can provide
Technical guidance
Dispatch of Japanese doctors
Bringing in trainees to Japan

◯ Time
June: stakeholder meeting (doctors, government officials)
August: 2nd stakeholder meeting
(Fixed curriculum, teaching content, and the support system)
October: establishment of school, partnership with hospitals, and partnership with universities

If you can agree with these proposals, please send us a letter of BD stakeholders in their joint names as a gesture confirmation.

[hideyuki]

添削ありがとうございました。