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評価: 50 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/04/17 00:23:02
"E"ちゃんは"F"のドレス
"G"ちゃんは私からコーディネート賞をプレゼント
”H”さんは前日”C”のブースで購入してくれたタイツを着用してくれました
ウサギのコーディネイトがとても素敵
ゲスト席もとても華やか
楽しくお話させてもらいました
最後に玄関で集合写真
このイベントの模様は来週放送されるみたい
ショーと商品の販売。
"C"として初めてのイベント参加。
イベント参加の為のすべての事をフォローして、沢山の計らいをしてくれた”I"に感謝
あっという間の２日間
反省と感謝のロンドンイベント終了
"E"-chan received a "F"'s dress.
"G"-chan received the Good Coordinating Award from me.
"H"-san wore the tights that she had bought at the booth C a day before.
Coordinating outfits with the rabbit is very nice.
Guest seats are also very gorgeous.
I enjoyed chatting with them.
The group photo was taken at the front door at the end
This event seems to be broadcasted next week
The show and the sale of goods.
That was my first time participation in the event for as a member of "C".
I really appreciate "I" who supported me for everything to participate the event and took care of a lot of things.
Two days passed really quickly.
London event ended with some reflection points and a lot of gratitude.
レビュー ( 1 )
元の翻訳
"E"-chan received a "F"'s dress.
"G"-chan received the Good Coordinating Award from me.
"H"-san wore the tights that she had bought at the booth C a day before.
Coordinating outfits with the rabbit is very nice.
Guest seats are also very gorgeous.
I enjoyed chatting with them.
The group photo was taken at the front door at the end
This event seems to be broadcasted next week
The show and the sale of goods.
That was my first time participation in the event for as a member of "C".
I really appreciate "I" who supported me for everything to participate the event and took care of a lot of things.
Two days passed really quickly.
London event ended with some reflection points and a lot of gratitude.
修正後
"E"-chan received a "F"'s dress.
I gave "G"-chan the Good Coordinating Award.
"H"-san wore the tights that she bought at the booth C a day before.
Coordinating outfits as a rabbit was very nice.
Guest seats were also very gorgeous.
I enjoyed chatting with them.
The group photo was taken at the front door at the end.
This event seems to be broadcasted next week.
The show and the sales of goods.
That was my first time to participate in the event as a member of "C".
I really appreciate "I" who supported me in every way to participate in the event and took care of a lot of things.
Two days passed really quickly.
London event ended with some reflection points and a lot of gratitude.
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文中アルファベット”A"はグループ名、”B”はイベントの名前、”C”はブランド名、”D"は場所名、"E"は人の名前、"F"は洋服のブランド名、”G”は人の名前、”H”は人の名前、"I"は人の名前です。
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