翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

あなたがアップロードしていた写真では、レンズの状態がはっきりと見えません。このため、私は事前にあなたへ質問をしていたのです。しかしながら、あなたの回答は事実と異なりました。説明文も事実と異なります。だから、私は送料も含めたfull refundをあなたへ要求します。

英語

With the photo you uploaded, I can't see the condition of lenses clearly.
So I asked you a question. However your answer didn't match the fact.
The caption didn't match the fact too.
Therefore I would like to request you a full refund including a shipping cost.

レビュー ( 2 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/02 15:44:15

元の翻訳
With the photo you uploaded, I can't see the condition of lenses clearly.
So I asked you a question. However your answer didn't match the fact.
The caption didn't match the fact too.
Therefore I would like to request you a full refund including a shipping cost.

修正後
In the photo you uploaded, I can't see the condition of the lenses clearly.
So I asked you a question. However, your answer didn't match the fact.
The caption didn't match the fact, either.
Therefore, I would like to request you a full refund including the shipping cost.

[yuko_kubodera]

添削をありがとうございました。

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/02 18:16:16

元の翻訳
With the photo you uploaded, I can't see the condition of lenses clearly.
So I asked you a question. However your answer didn't match the fact.
The caption didn't match the fact too.
Therefore I would like to request you a full refund including a shipping cost.

修正後
With the photo you uploaded, I can't see the condition of lenses clearly.
So I asked you a question. However your answer didn't match the fact.
The caption didn't match the fact either.
Therefore I would like to request you a full refund including a shipping chargest.

captionではありますが、Product Descriptionのほうが自然だと思います。

[yuko_kubodera]

ありがとうございました。最後のは、shipping chargeですね。

[chee_madam]

こんにちは。cost でも通じると思うのですが、どちらかというと、shioping chargesのほうが定着している感がありますので修正させていただきました。

[yuko_kubodera]

ありがとうございました。