翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

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不備内容などを併せてご連絡をさせていただきます。
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英語

As well, if your screening accepted safely, we are going to send you member ID and password later.
※It takes about 1 or 3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you un adapted at screening, we will notice you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

レビュー ( 2 )

kazue_ishikawaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/26 23:50:32

元の翻訳
As well, if your screening accepted safely, we are going to send you member ID and password later.
※It takes about 1 or 3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you un adapted at screening, we will notice you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
As well, if your screening accepted safely, we are going to send you a member ID and password later.
※ It takes about 1 to 3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you don’t get through the screening, we will notice you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

[meg6]

ありがとうございます！

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/03/27 01:26:06

元の翻訳
As well, if your screening accepted safely, we are going to send you member ID and password later.
※It takes about 1 or 3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you un adapted at screening, we will notice you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
As well, if your screening accepted safely [awkward phrasing], we are going to send you a member ID and password later.
※It takes 1-3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you un adapted at screening [incomprehensible], we will notice [wrong verb] you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

[meg6]

ありがとうございます！