翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

ヒロインとなる壱岐ひよりは、夜トが行っていた猫の捜索のとき、交通事故に巻き込まれて簡単に幽体離脱する体質となってしまいました。その体質を直してもらおうと夜トとの関わりを持つようになり、様々な事件に巻き込まれていきます。
この作品に出てくる神様たちはみな人間的で面白いです。

英語

Hiyori Iki, the heroine, got in the habit of easily having out-of-body experiences after having a traffic accident when Yato was searching for a missing cat. For curing the habitude, she got involved with Yato, and thus began to get involved with various cases. The gods appearing in this story are all humanly and interesting.

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o63odtはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/31 18:24:09

元の翻訳
Hiyori Iki, the heroine, got in the habit of easily having out-of-body experiences after having a traffic accident when Yato was searching for a missing cat. For curing the habitude, she got involved with Yato, and thus began to get involved with various cases. The gods appearing in this story are all humanly and interesting.

修正後
Hiyori Iki, the heroine, was left with a condition of easily having out-of-body experiences after having a traffic accident when Yato was searching for a missing cat. For curing the condition, she got involved with Yato, and thus began to get involved with various cases. The gods appearing in this story are like humans and interesting.