翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/01/11 00:14:18

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3_yumie7 52 英語、フランス語、スペイン語、ポルトガル語から日本語への翻訳をしています。...
日本語

あけましておめでとうございます!ロスでの3日間の滞在を終えて、日本に帰ってるところです。サクララウンジでビールが飲み放題なのは素晴らしいけど、ホントはキリンが飲みたかったな。今回の出張は今までで一番満足感があって、本当に楽しかったです。帰ったらたくさんの仕事が僕を待っていることを考えるとあまりに嬉しくて泣き出しそうです。今後の課題はスペイン語の勉強だと痛感しました。

英語

Happy New Year !

I am going back to Japan after three days stay in Los Angeles. It was great to be able to dring beer freely at Sakura Lounge, but, in fact, I wanted to drink Kirin beer. This business trip was the most satisfactory one that I have ever experienced and I really enjoyed it. Thinkng of the jobs the line up in Japan, I am so happy that I feel like crying!
This time, I keenly felt that I have to study Spanish in the future.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/11 09:56:16

元の翻訳
Happy New Year !

I am going back to Japan after three days stay in Los Angeles. It was great to be able to dring beer freely at Sakura Lounge, but, in fact, I wanted to drink Kirin beer. This business trip was the most satisfactory one that I have ever experienced and I really enjoyed it. Thinkng of the jobs the line up in Japan, I am so happy that I feel like crying!
This time, I keenly felt that I have to study Spanish in the future.

修正後
Happy New Year !

I am going back [tense?] to Japan after three days' stay in Los Angeles. It was great to be able to dring beer freely at Sakura Lounge, but, in fact, I wanted to drink Kirin beer. This business trip was the most satisfactory one that I have ever experienced and I really enjoyed it. Thinkng of the jobs piled up in Japan, I am so happy that I feel like crying!
This time, I keenly felt that I have to study Spanish in the future.

3_yumie7 3_yumie7 2014/01/11 10:09:44

Thank you for your review!

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