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日本語

対照群として用いたデータは、検査値の測定器であるマシーンＸの基準値設定の根拠となるものである。健常l群に含まれたのは、そのうち5000人のデータ（男性2300人、女性2700人）だった。
健常群と疾患群の回帰直線は、男性は40歳、女性は50歳で交叉し、検定によって非平行性は棄却されなかった。つまり交点より低い年齢では、疾患群は健常群に比較して検査値が低く、高い年齢では検査値が高くなることがわかった。

英語

The data used as control group are chosen as the basis to set up the reference values of machine X, which is the measuring intrument of the values to be tested. The ones regarded as the commonly healthy group included data obtained from 5000 people among the previously mentioned (2000 males and 2700 females).

The straight lines of the regressions corrresponding to the healthy and sick groups are intersected for males at 40 years old and for females at 50 years old, without being rejected the lack of concurrence in accordance with the test. In other words, the age below the intersection point in the test is lowering for the sick group in comparison to the commonly healthy group, whereas it is understood that the age above this is increasing according to the test.

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mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/04 15:21:08

元の翻訳
The data used as control group are chosen as the basis to set up the reference values of machine X, which is the measuring intrument of the values to be tested. The ones regarded as the commonly healthy group included data obtained from 5000 people among the previously mentioned (2000 males and 2700 females).

The straight lines of the regressions corrresponding to the healthy and sick groups are intersected for males at 40 years old and for females at 50 years old, without being rejected the lack of concurrence in accordance with the test. In other words, the age below the intersection point in the test is lowering for the sick group in comparison to the commonly healthy group, whereas it is understood that the age above this is increasing according to the test.

修正後
The data used as control group are chosen as the basis to set up the reference values of machine X, which is the measuring intrument of the values to be tested. The ones regarded as the commonly healthy group included data obtained from 5,000 people among the previously mentioned (2,000 males and 2,700 females).

The straight lines of the regressions corrresponding to the healthy and sick groups are intersected for males at 40 years old and for females at 50 years old, without being rejected the lack of concurrence in accordance with the test. In other words, the age below the intersection point in the test is lowering for the sick group in comparison to the commonly healthy group, whereas it is understood that the age above this is increasing according to the test.

Good translation.

[ymgonzalez2000]

Many thanks for your review!