翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/12/01 17:45:44

sujiko
sujiko 50 IT、金融などを中心として社内翻訳者を数年経験後、フリーランス翻訳者として...
日本語

展望台東京シティビューで高さ約5メートルのツリーの点灯式が開催された。溶けかかった氷のように見えるツリーは「いつかは消えてしまう、形あるものの一瞬の輝き」を表現していて、大人になると失ってしまいがちな子供心や遊び心をもう一度心に秘めて未来に走り出そう、というメッセージが込められている。ツリーの周囲には自撮り用ミラーを二つ設置。切り株型の腰掛けに座って写真を撮ると、ツリーと自分の姿をうまく収めることができる。設置期間は11月29日から12月25日まで。営業時間は22時まで延長

英語

Lighting ceremony of tree about as high as 5 meters was held in Tokyo City View observation deck. The tree whicl looks like melting ice expresses "it eventually disappears, form glistening in an instant". It includes a message to run for future by holding the mind of child and mind of play that we tend to lose when we are grown up secretly. 2 mirrors to take picture by ourselves are set around the tree.

If we take a picture by sitting at the seat of stump, we can take a picture of tree and ourselves neatly.

It is set from Novemer 29 to December 25. The business hour is postponed to 22:00.

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jasmine_66はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/09 16:26:58

元の翻訳
Lighting ceremony of tree about as high as 5 meters was held in Tokyo City View observation deck. The tree whicl looks like melting ice expresses "it eventually disappears, form glistening in an instant". It includes a message to run for future by holding the mind of child and mind of play that we tend to lose when we are grown up secretly. 2 mirrors to take picture by ourselves are set around the tree.

If we take a picture by sitting at the seat of stump, we can take a picture of tree and ourselves neatly.

It is set from Novemer 29 to December 25. The business hour is postponed to 22:00.

修正後
A lighting ceremony of tree about 5 meters was held in Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree which looks like melting ice expresses "it eventually disappears, form glistening in an instant". It conveys a message for people to move forward to the future with a childlike and creative mindset that we tend to lose when we grow up. There are 2 mirrors set around the tree for people to take pictures of themselves.

If we take a picture by sitting at stump, we can take a picture of ourselves with the tree in our back neatly.

The ceremony is from 29th of November to 25th of December. The business hour is extended to 22:00.

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