翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 商品の仕入先へのメールです。商品には青色のものと黒色のものがあります。

日本語

説明不足で申し訳ない。私は常に注文した分は支払える準備をしてある。今回は、クレジットカードの締日の関係で「もう少し待ってもらえないか」とあなたに聞いただけである。決して注文分を支払えないというわけではなかった。私の手元の在庫は既にないので急いで注文したいのだが、今から青と黒のものをロットで注文したら何日かかるだろうか？合計40台ほど欲しい。また、あなたの手元に何台か残っているか？残っていたら私に売ってほしい。

英語

I regret my poor explanation then. I am always ready for any payment for orders I place. However, I asked you to wait for a while at that time as the cutoff date of my credit card was very close. Never did I mean that I was not able to afford it. My stock has run out already, and I need to order right away. If I order blue and black in lots now, how long will they take to reach me? I want about 40 units in total. On the other hand, how many units do you still have? If you have some, would you sell them to me?

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/13 10:31:36

元の翻訳
I regret my poor explanation then. I am always ready for any payment for orders I place. However, I asked you to wait for a while at that time as the cutoff date of my credit card was very close. Never did I mean that I was not able to afford it. My stock has run out already, and I need to order right away. If I order blue and black in lots now, how long will they take to reach me? I want about 40 units in total. On the other hand, how many units do you still have? If you have some, would you sell them to me?

修正後
I regret my poor explanation then. I am always ready for any payment for orders I place. However, I asked you to wait for a while at that time as the cutoff date of my credit card was very close. Never did I mean that I was not able to afford it. My stock has run out already, and I need to order right away. If I order blue and black in lots now, how long will it take them to reach me? I want about 40 units in total. On the other hand, how many units do you still have? If you have some, would you sell them to me?

少し修正しました。

[14pon]

オマケしていただいて、ありがとうございます。
どうも、この「時間がかかる」が、ここで始めてからというもの混乱をきたしていて、困ったもんです。中学レベルだっての。

[tani1973]

いえいえ。非常に分かりやすく自然な英語に感心いたしました。