翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2013/11/11 11:11:14

ekyab
ekyab 50
日本語

第2条 定義
本利用規約において使用する用語の意義は、次の各号に定めるとおりとします。
( 1 )本アプリとは弊社が運営する「A」と称するスマートフォンアプリ(iOS/Android)をいいます。
( 2 )本サービスとは本アプリ上で提供される全てのサービスをいいます。
( 3 )利用者とは本アプリを利用するために会員登録している者をいいます。
( 4 )情報とは本サービスを利用して投稿できる画像をいいます。
( 5 )投稿とは利用者が本アプリに画像をアップロードする行為をいいます。

英語

Article 2 definition.
In this user policy, the meanings of the terms used shall be as prescribed respectively in those items.
(1) This application is referred to smartphone app (iOS/Android) "A" which is provided by our company.
(2) This service is referred to all services provided on this application.
(3) An user is referred to registered member to use this application.
(4) Information is referred to images which can be posted by using this service.
(5) A posting is referred to an act what the user upload their images to this application.




レビュー ( 1 )

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o63odtはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2013/11/11 14:45:17

元の翻訳
Article 2 definition.
In this user policy, the meanings of the terms used shall be as prescribed respectively in those items.
(1) This application is referred to smartphone app (iOS/Android) "A" which is provided by our company.
(2) This service is referred to all services provided on this application.
(3) An user is referred to registered member to use this application.
(4) Information is referred to images which can be posted by using this service.
(5) A posting is referred to an act what the user upload their images to this application.




修正後
Article 2 definition.
In this user policy, the meanings of the terms used shall be prescribed respectively as in those items.
(1) This application refers to the smartphone app "A" (iOS/Android) which is provided by our company.
(2) This service refers to all services provided on this application.
(3) A user refers to registered member with intention to use this application.
(4) Information refers to images which can be posted by using this service.
(5) A posting refers to an act where the user upload their images to this application.



using "is referred to" can give a completely different meaning
"User" starts with the consonant sound "y" therefore it cannot be "an user"
The reason why we have a and an is to make it sound more natural, which is why we pay attention to sound, not spelling when figuring out whether we use a or an.

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ekyab ekyab 2013/11/11 15:58:17

Thank you for your review.

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