翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2013/11/01 10:33:24
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私はこの商品を44台購入予定です。あなたは何台の在庫を持っていますか？この商品を日本へ発送できますか？44台購入したらボリュームディスカウントはしてもらえますか？お返事をお待ちしております。
I am planning to buy 44 of this product.
How many do you have in stock? If I make a purchase, can you ship them to Japan? Plus, can you offer me a volume discount in case I buy 44?
Waiting for your reply.
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元の翻訳
I am planning to buy 44 of this product.
How many do you have in stock? If I make a purchase, can you ship them to Japan? Plus, can you offer me a volume discount in case I buy 44?
Waiting for your reply.
修正後
I am planning to buy 44 of these items.
How many are in stock, and can they be shipped to Japan? Plus, can you offer me a volume discount since I'm buying 44 of them?
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Kindly awaiting your reply
44 is more than one so you must say products
In addition, the style sounding a little rude/demanding so I softened it, but overall good translation.