翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → ネイティブ 英語 )

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日本語

既存顧客だけではなく、日本の文化に関心があるが、「A」を認知していない潜在顧客層も含めた幅広い層を対象ターゲットとするべきだと思います

英語

I think we should not restrict our target to the existing customers but also include the potential customers who are not familiar to [A] but have interest in Japanese culture and hence making the target zone larger.

レビュー ( 1 )

katrina_zはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/17 02:32:51

元の翻訳
I think we should not restrict our target to the existing customers but also include the potential customers who are not familiar to [A] but have interest in Japanese culture and hence making the target zone larger.

修正後
I think we should make the target zone larger and not restrict our target to existing customers but also include potential customers who are not familiar with [A] but have an interest in Japanese culture.