翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

商品サンプルが届きました。価格リストも確認しました。
黄色と白が品切れになっていますが、再生産の予定はありますか？
この商品は５個で並べた方が見映えするので、日本で売るには５色欲しいですね。
あと、限定版で、宇宙のイラストが描かれたものがありましたが、再生産の予定はありますか？

価格は現在提示されている価格では高すぎますね。
私達は日本総代理を希望しているので、この価格では小売店に卸すことができません。
BBREM104や、BBREM105の卸価格と同じか、それ以下にできませんか？

英語

We have received the product samples and checked the price list.
It said yellow and white are out of stock. Are you expecting to remanufacture them?
This item would look better with all colors together, and we would like to have them in five colors to sell in Japan.
Also, are you expecting to remanufacture the limited edition with the space graphics?

The price listed here is too high. We are hoping to be an exclusive agent, and it would be difficult to distribute the items to retailers with the price. Would it be possible to make it as low as the wholesale price of BBREM104 and BBREM105, or possibly lower than that?

レビュー ( 1 )

shibataはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/09/03 08:26:18

元の翻訳
We have received the product samples and checked the price list.
It said yellow and white are out of stock. Are you expecting to remanufacture them?
This item would look better with all colors together, and we would like to have them in five colors to sell in Japan.
Also, are you expecting to remanufacture the limited edition with the space graphics?

The price listed here is too high. We are hoping to be an exclusive agent, and it would be difficult to distribute the items to retailers with the price. Would it be possible to make it as low as the wholesale price of BBREM104 and BBREM105, or possibly lower than that?

修正後
We have received the product samples and checked the price list.
It said yellow and white ones are out of stock. Are you expecting to resume manufacturing them?
These items would look better with all of the five colors together, so we would like to have five of them, each with a different color, to be sold in Japan.
Also, are you expecting to resume manufacturing the limited edition with the illustration of the universe?

I must say that the price listed here is too high. We are hoping to be your sole distributor in Japan, and it would be difficult to sell the items to retailers with the price. Would it be possible to make it as low as the wholesale price of BBREM104 and BBREM105, or possibly lower than that?

[piro627]

レビューありがとうございました。とても参考になりました。一点質問があります。「日本で売るには5色欲しい」の箇所ですが、添削していただいた文章では" each with a different color"とあります。これはどういう意味で追加されたのでしょうか？5色あるということは、それぞれがdifferent colorなのはもちろんですが、あえて追加された意図とは？ご教示いただけますと幸いです。よろしくお願いします。

[shibata]

そうですね、ご指摘の通り、each with a different color は無くても文脈で通じるかもしれませんね。小生のこれまでの経験で、大事なところは念を押す癖が出たのかもしれません。

[piro627]

なるほど、大事なところを念押しするというのは大切ですね。ありがとうございました！