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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/08/26 23:08:40

bananamoon
bananamoon 50 Grad. school student in Germany. Grad...
日本語

お待たせ致しました。

注文をお願いします。

Tour Issue S200 40.5(2 iron) 1 piece
$29でお願いします。

クレームがきた顧客に発送するため、お手数をおかけしますが、商品に間違えがないように、必ず確認をお願いします。
なるべく早く発送していただけると助かります。

英語

Let you wait so long time.

I want to order thatTour Issue S200 40.5(2 iron) 1 piece, $29.

I will ship this for the customer who had a complain, thus please make sure there is no mistake about this commodity.
I will very appreciate you ship this commodity as soon as possible.

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russ87 68
russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/14 00:05:44

元の翻訳
Let you wait so long time.

I want to order thatTour Issue S200 40.5(2 iron) 1 piece, $29.

I will ship this for the customer who had a complain, thus please make sure there is no mistake about this commodity.
I will very appreciate you ship this commodity as soon as possible.

修正後
I am sorry to have kept you waiting.

I want to order that Tour Issue S200 40.5(2 iron) 1 piece, $29.

I will ship this to a customer who made a complaint, so please make sure there are no mistakes with this item.
It will be much appreciated if you could ship this commodity as soon as possible.

A couple of things to look at but the meaning wasn't lost

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